Songs You Wrote

[lion_roog]

Man, I haven't visited this thread in a while...and some of these songs are really good...

Here's one I recently Wrote...the lyrics in parenthesis "( and )" is suppost to be background vocals...

Be There For Me (I Don't Want to be Lonely)

Baby
Will you always
Be there for me
Or am I
(Or should I)
Destined to be lonely
(Expect to be lonely)
Baby
Will you always
be there for me
(there for me)

It's mid May
And I don't know which way
We're gonna go
Why don't ya let me know
Baby
The things you say
Have got me thinking
Maybe things aren't working
And all sorts of things
Start forming inside my brain
Like do you really love me
Because the things you do
Have got me wondering
(wondering)
Will you always
Be there for me
(for me)
Or am I destined
to be lonely
In this world
that's spins so coldly
So hold me
And let me know Baby
Will you always
Be there for me
(Be there for me)

Baby
Will you always
Be there for me
Or am I
(Or should I)
Destined to be lonely
(Expect to be lonely)
Baby
Will you always
be there for me
(there for me)

Beautiful things
Are so hard to create
But so easily to break
And the world
Is full of pain
Looking for something
To take it all away
Baby
Please do that for me
Everyday
(everyday)
And I'll love you
In everyway
(everyway)
You're the center
Of my universe
But I wonder
If I'm even on your radar
Because sometimes
You seem so far...away
And it's got me wishing
To bring you to me
I don't want to be lonely
(Don't want to be lonely)
Beautiful Baby
(Beautiful Baby)

Baby
Will you always
Be there for me
Or am I
(Or should I)
Destined to be lonely
(Expect to be lonely)
Baby
Will you always
be there for me
(there for me)

The days are day
and the nights are night
Both dark and light
Both wrong and right
Hold me tight
Through both day and night
The ups and downs
The ins and outs
And everything they're about
Hold me now
Make me feel
How I should feel
Make it feel real
The fear in me
Has got me
Acting crazy
Acting insane
Save me, baby
Cure my illness
My fear of silence
Don't leave me
With no one
To lean on
I need this allience
I don't want to be lonely
(Don't want to be lonely)
I don't want to be lonely
(Don't want to be lonely)
*fade*

[Azerane]

Roog that's really cool.

[Daniel]

i feel like contributing

It's a re-write of Linkin Park's Numb i wrote for a Meteora remix album, but never decided to use them in the remixed song
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Suddenly I feel so alone
No-one cares for me
Not even those I know
I dont know what is troubling me
It's like a part of me
Has been stolen by you

(You just need to come out and say it, just need to come out and say it)
This feeling's causing me pain
But I don't know how to explain
(You just need to come out and say it, just need to come out and say it)

I become so numb
When I feel you near
When you're with me
There's nothing to fear
You love someone else
So it's not allowed
I want us to work
But I don't know how

It's really hard to stop thinking of you.
What is this feeling
That i've never felt before?
But I just hope that you feel the same way
The last thing I want
Is to ruin what I had with you


(You just need to come out and say it, just need to come out and say it)
This feeling's causing me pain
But I don't know how to explain
(You just need to come out and say it, just need to come out and say it)
And all I want to do
Is say how I feel about you

I become so numb
When I feel you near
When you're with me
There's nothing to fear
You love someone else
So it's not allowed
I want us to work
But I don't know how

All I Want
Is to say that 'I Love You'
But I Know
That you won't feel the same
Your heart belongs to somebody else

I become so numb
When I feel you near
When you're with me
There's nothing to fear
You love someone else
So it's not allowed
I want us to work
But I don't know how


I become so numb
When i feel you near
(Now I know what is troubling me)

I become so numb
When i feel you near
(Now I know what is troubling me)

[Sombolia]

So yeah, I originally posted this in the song lyrics thread because I was sortof kindof reallyembarassedbymywriting, but some people have told me they're good, so, here you go. >>;

Suburban Pipe Dream

I've spent these sleepless nights in vain
Denying everything, including my name
You're all liars, and we're all fakes
Besides, we spend too much time together anyways

Suffocating on this California air
Hollywood stares, suburban dreams
Happiness has called, but it's running late
That city by the bay, it's just a day away

I live life in the future
So your words are wasted on me
It's all wasted time
And I'm all wasted air

It's the golden state
With the silver lining
And sometime's it's alright
The sun is shining bright
But to me, this all looks grey

Suffocating on this California air
Hollywood stares, suburban dreams
Happiness has called, but it's running late
That city by the bay, it's just a day away



*runs far, far away*

[lion_roog]

I forgot about this thread...

Nice songs Daniel and Sombolia. And I wouldn't be embarassed by your song, Sombolia...it's good...

[Monai]

I'm a little scared that I'm actually posting this, but here you go.

A Forthcoming Murder

Oh, what have we done?
Slowly, let's spin into the sun
God is a lie
Because he says we're all the heathens, so what am I?

And I don't mind
And I don't mind

Someone's coming to get you
So you can't go anywhere
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware
Yeah

Oh, it's coming undone
Make it feel right like I'm the number one
I'm under a spell
It turned me into nothing but I'm alive and well

And I don't mind
And I don't mind

Someone's coming to get you
So you can't go anywhere
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware
Someone's coming to get you
I don't mind but I wanted to be there
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware

And there's something I don't understand
Why do they suspect me for a broken hand
I haven't made advances yet
I haven't got this trance out yet
And I don't want to die yet anyway

But I don't mind
But I don't mind

Someone's coming to get you
So you can't go anywhere
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware
Someone's coming to get you
I don't mind but I wanted to be there
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware

Someone's coming to get you
So you can't go anywhere
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware
Someone's coming to get you
I don't mind but I wanted to be there
Someone's trying to get you
I'm alive, I'm aware

XP

[Sombolia]

Gah, that's a good song Monai. :] I'd listen to it. I liked this part; it stood out to me, for some reason:

I'm under a spell
It turned me into nothing but I'm alive and well

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[Azerane]

*slinks in* everyone's songs are so much better than mine... I wrote this one last night.

Heavy weather starts the day
That you went away
Never knew the reason why
This junction had to come
Empty echoes in the air
Silence everywhere
I don?t see how this life, could be the life for some

What do I do, how do I know?
If you?re coming home
What did you feel, what did you see
When you looked at me?
Everything?s changed, nothing the same
Seems that we are done

This empty room is staring at me
Everybody?s noticed that you?re gone.

People stop and people stare
It can be so hard to bear
Trying to hold on to life
When everything seems lost
Wonder if that I will learn
Taking a new turn
But everything we had here, was had at such a cost

What do I do, how do I know?
If you?re coming home
What did you feel, what did you see
When you looked at me?
Everything?s changed, nothing the same
Seems that we are done

This empty room is staring at me
Everybody?s noticed that you?re gone.

For it seems so long
Now that you?ve been gone
So I close my eyes
As this feeling dies?

Instrumental

Did you ever care to ask
Why I wore that mask?
It?s not that I was hiding love
I just didn?t want to hurt
I?ve hurt so many times before
I didn?t want to anymore
Yet now my heart is breaking as you see that mask is gone

What did you do, how did you know
That to leave was right?
What did I feel, what did I see?
When you left me be
Everything?s changed, nothing the same
Now that you are gone

Those hollow words you left out for me
Just seem so much sadder with each dawn

[Monai]

Great song Azzy!

Anyway, I decided to write something else. Since, well, I keep reading over my old song and don't like it much. XD

So, ladies and gents, enjoy.

Open-Minded Anxiety

Where was the rain on your face yesterday?
Seems to me it's gone
It's an affliction that tried to get under your skin
While you were undone
And whilst the undertone of darkness remains
The sky might finally turn blue again

Or maybe this is just another delusional day
Because it seems so damn unlikely the clouds will lose their gray
And even though I remember what it was like before
I realise that it just can't be like that anymore
And I'm a little tired of love anyway

Where were the stretchers to take me away?
Because I'm feeling numb
And maybe it's just a side effect of all those nights
When I wondered where you'd gone
And whilst I'd forgotten how to heal the pain
I think my blood might be running again

Or maybe this is just another delusional day
Because it seems so damn unlikely the clouds will lose their gray
And even though I remember what it was like before
I realise that it just can't be like that anymore
And I'm a little tired of love anyway

And yes, I'm sure that I can't be sure of anything anymore

Or maybe this is just another delusional day
Because it seems so damn unlikely the clouds will lose their gray
And even though I remember what it was like before
I realise that it just can't be like that anymore
And I'm a little tired of love anyway
And I'm a little tired of love anyway
And I'm a little tired

Cuz maybe this is just another delusional day
Because it seems so damn unlikely the clouds will lose their gray
And even though I remember what it was like before
I realise that it just can't be like that anymore
And I'm a little tired of love anyway
So let's forget about today

[Azerane]

Thanks ^^

That's a really cool song Monai, you've got some real nice lyrics.

[LunarCat]

awesome job Monai! they would make an great song!

[A-non-a-mus]

I wrote this a while back... for one of my fanfics... it's a dirge... (sung low, with minimal background music)
I did also write and perform the music sheet for this as well...

it was a funeral-type dirge...



(spoken)

where the smile once so oft seen to vanish so soon it's empty space

The melody of your sweet laughter to pass ever away heard now only in
memories
oft the passing of years draw ever near than the cold left upon thy wakeof
your absence from our midst


(sung ... mostly low tone)
gone away (away)
where hast thou gonethat stayest so long
our mind ever frozen upon thy presence

gone anon though thy warth doth remain
gone forever doth thou sweet voice
forever missed thou laughter so brightening,
come now as a hallow whisper as the wind doth blow

where thou pass oh beautiful years?
where thou pass oh voice so fair

for the comming of thy yearsof joy to end

for now doth thy smile fade from thy spilt life
how thine eyes shine 'er again
what life loved, thy spot left ever frozen in time
as thine end smile stay forever frozen upon thy lips

for one of such memories left to share
abruptly end, left unshared
no more shall thy smile warm the hearts of friends,
no more shall thy kind voice sooth the weary
for voice so fair to turn to naught a forign sound withen the distant
memories
for gone are the days of thine ringing laughter

Would that we had gone with you


(spoken as music begins to fade)

may thine life, thine voice,thine joy, thine dreams, thine memories, live
ever on
withen our hearts, withen our minds
may thine last embrace be not forgotten
may thine love be not lost

[Monai]

Sorry to be a necromancer, but I just wrote this. xD If you're wondering, it's about a couple, one of whom happens to be comatosed and paralysed. It starts off as the guy speaking, then the girl, then the guy again, then the narrator. I don't like it that much, but see what you think.

The Information Leak Which Led To My Downfall

The melodic breathing of your motionless comatosed body
Rocking me to sleep whilst fallen angels whisk the dead away
Talking to you in vain attempts to wake you
I'm wondering: Is this world now alien to you?
Do you still remember me?

I remember when we fell in love
We promised we would never part
But you're not waking for a start

And when you talk in your sleep
I can hear every word you say
Like a broken record you repeat yourself
I've heard a thousand times the four words: 'I still love you'

Inside this dream I can still hear him speaking, perched right beside
I'm paralysed
Reaching into my emotions and pulling me to tears
I'm not waking, but don't go yet, keep on talking
There's more to this story than I know already
If you leave will you still remember me?

I remember when we fell in love
We promised we would never part
But I'm not waking for a start

And when I talk in my sleep
I want you to hear every word I say
I never want you to move from me
I've said a thousand times the four words: 'I still love you'

I remember when I heard you for the final time
I was pleading 'keep on talking'
But you never spoke again

And when she talked in her sleep
He could hear every word she said
Like a broken record she said a thousand times
What would become her final four words: 'I still love you'

And we're closing this chapter on these souls
What a representation of a lost and broken life

And when she talked in her sleep
He could hear every word she said
Like a broken record she said a thousand times
What would become her final four words: 'I still love you'

[Neola]

Great songs, Monai and Anon!

And I was wondering...do melodies count as "songs" you wrote?

*edit* nevermind, I posted it somewhere else

[Azerane]

August 8-9th 2006
No title yet...

So quiet, Now that I'm here
Alone, at home
And there's air, filling this empty chair
Next to me
And I cry so hard I cannot see
Now you're far from me
And all I hear, is the wind, whispering

So long, That you've been gone
Let's say, away
But for you, it's home for you
It's plain, to see
And I wonder when I'll see you next
In this eternity
Without you here, it's just the wind, whispering

And every moment spent without you
Is not a moment I wish to live
Yet here I am, sitting here
Wishing the days away...
For you, and for me, I pray

My love,
How did we get here
So far, so far-
Away, from each other's embrace
As I sleep in this place you wake
And it seems to me we're doomed to be
So far across the sea
Where all that's heard, is the wind, whispering

And every moment spent without you
Is not a moment I wish to live
Yet here I am, sitting here
Wishing the days away...
For you, and for me, I pray

Long gone,
But not forgotten at all
My love, I love-
You more, as I think about the times
We always shared
Though with realisation sinking in
I know we'll be parted more
And once again it's just the wind, whispering to me

I hear it every night and day
Since you've gone away
I know we'll be together soon
But soon is not today
But the distance it is looming
And all I have is photographs
Nothing can console me but,
These memories of the past

So quiet,
Now that I'm here
Alone, at home-
So long,
That you've been gone
Let's say, away-
My love,
How did we get here
So far, so far-
Long gone,
But not forgotten at all
My love, I love... you

[Neola]

Beautiful yet sad...
That song is about Kintaru and you, isn't it?
If so, it really shows how you're feeling atm...hope you'll be together again soon
And you better keep up the good song writing

[Azerane]

Yeah, it is about us two. Thankyou for the compliments, much appreciated.

[Monai]

Great song Azzy And hope you get to see him again, soon.

Anyways, on a slightly different note, I wrote another song =) Hope you guys like it, this one is called...

Deceit for the Masses

Don't tell me you believed every word I said
Well, that was a grand mistake
No one ever told you?
I'm sorry dear, we're closing for the night

Maybe you're just too innocent
Or maybe i'm too much of a senseless disease

But this is the masterclass
In how to be a disaster
Both socially and mentally
Take it from me, you won't expect what you're about to see

Light the fuse!
Light the fuse to my ineptitude
Take away everything that's closest to me
Because it just might help
I don't think there's a reason i'm writing
But I just wish you well

Maybe you're just too innocent
Or maybe i'm too much of a senseless disease

But this is the masterclass
In how to be a disaster
Both socially and mentally
Take it from me, you won't expect what you're about to see
Is it just fantasy?
Or a shot in the dark?
Shot in the dark

Fast as the lightning striking you down
Taking away your throne and your crown
You won't be queen anymore
Once you have experienced this

But this is the masterclass
In how to be a disaster
Both socially and mentally
Take it from me, you won't expect what you're about to see
Is it just fantasy?
Or a shot in the dark?
Shot in the dark
Shot in the dark
Shot in the dark

[Azerane]

That's really well written Monai.. you're a good writer. I like it!

[Neola]

Yeah, I like it too ^^

Just out of interest...have any of you ever composed melodies to your songs? Or are you planning to do so?