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    Songs You Wrote

    Since we have a poems thread...why not a songs thread...here's a song I just wrote...

    "Slow Ridin'"

    I was drivin slow
    I gotta drive slow
    And y'all know
    I'mma rebel like that, yo!

    (chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    I got pulled over
    And said 'what's up, foo!'
    Cop say 'Chill out, due'
    But he threw salt in my game
    Acting like he knew my name
    But he just jealous of my fame
    Cuz I was slow ridin' lake it rains
    Rollin on my dubs
    at fifty below to the clubs
    Why go Fifty five
    when you can just go five?!
    Show the patrol you can't hold my soul
    Forty miles per hour below, yo!
    Now let me hear my Thugs and Gangstas!

    {chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    Quit your honkin'
    Unless you cute
    Then boots we be knockin'
    As we slow ride all up the East Side, Aight
    10 in a forty is enough to get you horny
    Just remember my story
    about how I rebeled to glory
    Got a mouth and I'm onry
    As I slow ride
    In my low ride
    Throw your hands in the air
    And let 'em know how you do
    And it just ain't fair
    Until you drive like I do, foo
    Slow Ridin' fo' sho' I know what you blindin'
    To the fact that I got my act so climbin'
    Like a low on the hidin' inside my mind, G
    You Gotta be Slow Dri-ving
    Tell 'em all about it, Boyz!

    (Chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    (background chorus)
    sllllloooooooowww
    drrriiiiiiivvvvviiiiiiinnnnn'''''
    Weeee Beeeeee
    sllllloooooooowww
    drrriiiiiiivvvvviiiiiiinnnnn'''''

    (fade)
    Just like Nana...
    Just like Nana...

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    Very nicely done Roog.
    That which you manifest is before you.

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    Originally posted by Azerane
    Very nicely done Roog.
    ..Thank you...I hope it be number one hit!..

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    Send this to Mr Lloyd Bank.

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    Originally posted by Fendi
    Send this to Mr Lloyd Bank.
    ...Can you see them bumpin' it in the clubs?...

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    "I believe that qualifies as "ill"... at least from a technical standpoint." - Bender, (FuTuRaMa)

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    Lol nice Roog. I'm writing a song at the moment, but I have a bit of a writer's block.. I'll post it after I finish..

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    ...Futurama is awesome..

    Thanks, guys.....and Somby...if you need something to write about...write some lyrics about the cucumber shortage...

    I just want my cucumber
    You got my number
    Just remember the bread and butter
    Make it Wonder
    and I Can't Believe It's Not Butter
    Holla!!!

    I went to the store
    Something like before
    But once I got my brocolli
    I noticed they were out of my veggi
    Cucumber got my number
    I can't have no other my Brotha
    And I ain't ready
    to not have it in my Spagetti



    It's just off the top of my head...

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    Originally posted by lion_roog
    ...Futurama is awesome..
    "Don't make me go upside your head." - Bender

    Yo! Yo! Yo! Yo! Roog! Keep bustin' those mad rhymes.

    Peace.

    'O & : O... Spaghetti, gotta love that x).

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    Originally posted by SoniqueX
    "Don't make me go upside your head." - Bender

    Yo! Yo! Yo! Yo! Roog! Keep bustin' those mad rhymes.

    Peace.

    'O & : O... Spaghetti, gotta love that x).
    ...It's always fun trying to be creative after a beer, or two......But I wonder if I had a drink when I wrote these...

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    My songs and poems are completely random and weird, But thats what I am so I guess they match >)

    Loving you again.
    By: Kovu The Lion



    In this world that we live in
    In this world of make believe
    People find each other..
    Fall in love, Then just leave.

    Is it possible to stay together
    and stop lieing about each other
    Just stick with the ones you love, Forever...
    Find out why I'm singing..
    Find out why I'm Writing...
    Find out why i'm Mourning..

    Girl, I do these things for you
    I fight, and I try so hard..
    But everytime I turn around you point out every mistake that I DO.


    I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE
    I Don't' belong in this house
    THATS WHY I'M PACKING UP AND WALKING OUT THE DOOR!!!
    You can't trust me, You can't believe in me
    Why should I be in love with something I can't even see...!!!


    10 years has gone so fast...
    I start thinking of the good times, Oh how I wish they would last..
    But now I am...

    Walking through this town..
    I'm strolling through the crowd east-bound.
    I run into a stranger,
    It seems as if I know her.. So familiar.. But so much danger..
    That pretty face she had..
    I just can't get it in my mind, she's the one that drove me mad...!!!!!

    Who, what, when and where
    do you have to come upon me like this, Like you don't even care,
    I look at you and I wonder.. Do I even know you..
    We stare and then look away,
    and start to walk..
    And walk.. Away.. And to this very.. DAY!!!!

    Why did I ever leave you!!!
    I don't even know why, I tried and I did what I did, but baby I do!
    I do Love you, Still mourning, still crying, still living in this world of make believe.
    Please come back to me, Don't push me back and tell me to leave
    I want you again, Please give me another chance
    I swear I won't break another promise, I'll believe in this romance
    I want you to come back... I'm begging you darling.. Don't look away from me..
    Baby please.. I'm wanting you... I made a mistake..
    Left you and that house so long ago.. And then my life was nothing but a fake...
    I want you to forgive me.. Let me try one more time, to love you..
    Because loving you was my life...
    And since I've left you I've lived nothing but strife...

    BUT NOW!!! WE MEET AGAIN!!!
    I love you now more than ever before!!
    I want to take you in my arms and never let go..!!
    Because baby i want you to ....Know....

    I ..... Love you.. Forever and... Always...

    It's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice.

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    Re: Songs You Wrote

    Originally posted by lion_roog
    Since we have a poems thread...why not a songs thread...here's a song I just wrote...

    "Slow Ridin'"

    I was drivin slow
    I gotta drive slow
    And y'all know
    I'mma rebel like that, yo!

    (chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    I got pulled over
    And said 'what's up, foo!'
    Cop say 'Chill out, due'
    But he threw salt in my game
    Acting like he knew my name
    But he just jealous of my fame
    Cuz I was slow ridin' lake it rains
    Rollin on my dubs
    at fifty below to the clubs
    Why go Fifty five
    when you can just go five?!
    Show the patrol you can't hold my soul
    Forty miles per hour below, yo!
    Now let me hear my Thugs and Gangstas!

    {chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    Quit your honkin'
    Unless you cute
    Then boots we be knockin'
    As we slow ride all up the East Side, Aight
    10 in a forty is enough to get you horny
    Just remember my story
    about how I rebeled to glory
    Got a mouth and I'm onry
    As I slow ride
    In my low ride
    Throw your hands in the air
    And let 'em know how you do
    And it just ain't fair
    Until you drive like I do, foo
    Slow Ridin' fo' sho' I know what you blindin'
    To the fact that I got my act so climbin'
    Like a low on the hidin' inside my mind, G
    You Gotta be Slow Dri-ving
    Tell 'em all about it, Boyz!

    (Chorus)
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Yo!
    Say What?!
    Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin' Slow Drivin'
    We be Slow Drivin' as we Low ridin'
    Uh huh, Slow Drivin'
    Uh huh, Low Ridin'
    Yeeeaaahhh..Give it to 'em, Chico
    Sllllllloooooowwww drivin'
    Just like Nana

    (background chorus)
    sllllloooooooowww
    drrriiiiiiivvvvviiiiiiinnnnn'''''
    Weeee Beeeeee
    sllllloooooooowww
    drrriiiiiiivvvvviiiiiiinnnnn'''''

    (fade)
    Just like Nana...
    Just like Nana...
    Word you got some ill rhymes Homie..

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    I wrote a bit more of this song (which I accidently originally posted in the poems thread ) but yeah.. still not complete and no tune yet, which is kinda bad as generally there should be a tune before lyrics but you get that

    There you are at the end of the world
    Sitting in your mind thinking of that girl
    And you wonder, will it last?
    Here we are, at last together again
    Holding hands like we used to way back when-
    We were younger, these years past.

    But where are you when the sun goes down?
    And where are you when my tears pour out?
    And where are you? I wanna shout

    ?Cos today is here, just like you said
    But where are you, I?ve tears to shed
    You said you?d be here, I?ve fears I dread
    But here I am wiping tears instead
    Where are you? Where are you??

    You may think loneliness is my friend
    You may think emptiness is my trend
    But here I am, here I am, here I am?.!

    And I wonder,
    Do you see the stars in the sky tonight
    Is the full moon just as bright-
    To you?
    Raining down this cooling mist
    The shadowed clouds they are all new
    They weren?t here when you were-
    In my life

    ?Cos today is here, just like you said
    But where are you, I?ve tears to shed
    You said you?d be here, I?ve fears I dread
    But here I am wiping tears instead
    Where are you? Where are you??


    Oh yeah, did I mention it was crap?
    That which you manifest is before you.

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    *teary eyes*

    i love it!!!

    I look at you
    While you look at me
    And wonder how it can be
    That you love I
    Just a simple girl
    You make me feel out of this world
    You hold my hand
    And hug me close
    And tell me how you would be
    All alone in this lonely world
    If it wasn't for me

    (chorus)
    So come on, lets go
    To a world where we
    Just can be you and me
    So take my hand
    And lets run away
    To a place where you and I can be.

    She looks at me
    And shakes her head
    Asking if im blind, can I see
    he's not The One she says
    he won't do
    he's not from a good society
    hes black, a negro
    who just won't do
    he gets bad grades in school
    You're banned from seeing him, never again
    should i see his face

    (chorus)
    So come on, lets go
    To a world where we
    Just can be you and me
    So take my hand
    And lets run away
    To a place where you and I can be.

    I run away
    to find you here
    searching for an identity
    I look in your eyes
    they seem so sad
    How i wish that I could take your pain
    You smile at me
    With your sad brown eyes
    And say that it can never be
    I hold you tight i wanna never let go
    As we whisper words of love, quietly

    (chorus)
    So come on, lets go
    To a world where we
    Just can be you and me
    So take my hand
    And lets run away
    To a place where you and I can be.

    It's been five years
    I look at your grave
    In loving memory
    You took your life
    To end your pain
    And with you took a part of me
    Why did you leave me
    Where did you go
    I cry these tears alone once again
    You left me a letter, Said you did it for us
    But why did you have to leave

    (chorus)
    So come on, lets go
    To a world where we
    Just can be you and me
    So take my hand
    And lets run away
    To a place where you and I can be.

    my sorry attempt at my first son that i just took 5 minutes to write

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    Wow. Just... wow. You guys are great writers. I'd probably cry to some of these lyrics if they were songs. *sniff* Awesome work, really. Um.. I don't have any to add to the collection, so I'll just act as admirer, eh?

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    Aww Simbaspirit that song is so sad and such beautiful lyrics. For a 5 minute song it's very good.

    And thanks Nicoga
    That which you manifest is before you.

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    I'm in a writing mood lately so I decided to write this. I don't usually write songs but this one came to mind.

    Twilight's Night

    Verse 1

    The sun goes down
    And I look around
    I see your face staring right at me
    In a world of despair
    I'll soon be there
    Waiting for you to be there for me

    Chorus

    When the stars come out
    And I hear that sound
    The night always rushes upon me
    The twinkling stars
    And the crescent shaped moon
    Show their faces at me

    [Slows down singing and sings softly]

    And tonight, oh this night
    Is Twilight's night. Yeah.

    Verse 2

    I hear a sound
    It feels like I've drowned
    Underneath all of your sunny skies
    In a world of despair
    I'll soon be there
    Waiting for you to be there for me

    Chorus

    When the stars come out
    And I hear that sound
    The night always rushes upon me
    The twinkling stars
    And the crescent shaped moon
    Show their faces at me

    [Slows down singing and sings softly]

    And tonight, oh this night
    Is Twilight's night. Yeah.

    Bridge

    And I can't stop thinking
    The way we're believin'
    On this peaceful September night
    And I look at the past
    And I hope it will last
    The day I found your heart

    [Pauses]

    The day I found your soul
    And the day I found your love
    [Louder] It's Twilight's night

    Chorus [x2]

    When the stars come out
    And I hear that sound
    The night always rushes upon me
    The twinkling stars
    And the crescent shaped moon
    Show their faces at me

    [Slows down singing and sings softly]

    And tonight, oh this night
    Is Twilight's night. Yeah.

    Yeah. Oh, Twilight's night.
    I'll be alright.

    [Fades out.]

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    awww. i <3 it!!!
    and thanx Azerane

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    something just made up


    The End of Days



    Where is the end of candies
    When are we done with breathing
    Where have all the pouring rain of today gone with rainbows
    Where is the soul inside the body
    And I'm done with searching
    Oh, where is the fading song at the end that round my story

    All is right, is right, is looking back from the mountain height
    Now is now, is the stop we rest, is the product we have to satisfy
    Reverse an hourglass now, and count one thing off my life
    Ask me what I get that marks, the end of my days

    Doing what you believe right now
    Saying what I don't believe worth hearing
    What you and I worth now is washing away with the pouring rain
    Oh, do make up a hearty smile
    Oh, do punish self when you fail
    Please, please don't count your life by the majesty of the sun rising setting

    All is right, is sad, is looking back to where we bend
    Now is now, is the hope we rely, is the point in design
    What is my fear, I lose it now, and count one thing off my life
    What, what you get that marks the end of days

    Oh, why
    Why don't you ask
    What you get
    What marks
    Day after days

    Oh, why
    What's the catch
    What's the life
    At the end
    Of my days

    All is right, is right, is interrogating my mind myself my quest
    (and I'm so scared)
    Now is now, is the everything I have, is the remnant of my life
    (that's so I have to ask)
    I don't want no more dreams, and count one thing off my life
    (Oh I'm losing, I'm falling)
    Oh, that's why I mark, that's why I know, the end
    (end to my reliance)
    The end
    (end to my associations)
    The end of days

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    thats really good, Huma.

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