Poems

[Azerane]

Thanks Roog, I appreciate it... though try not to triple post '

I really love your poem 'The Things I Miss', I love the feel of it, the rythm, and the subject. It's really well written Roog.


The Hourglass I just wrote this one in about 20 mins, yay for the inspiration of 1am!

These days time seeps slowly by
Can't help but wonder the reason why
Those days are gone,
Our days are gone
And time still slowly passing, dies

It seems just yesterday we met
Were we so filled with false regret
We couldn't see,
We'd never see
That we weren't meant to be, not yet

I'd sit and I would think of you
Unknowing of what I should do
With you so far,
Away so far
A distant place never, I knew

And although we'll be apart still
I like to sometimes think we will
Makes things work out,
We can make out
Or at least pretend our hearts, we'd fill

But acting in this empty street
In always unrelenting heat
Just makes the pain,
It seals the pain
'Till our hearts no longer whole, do beat

So we'll leave with our empty hands
And travel to our seperate lands
A day away,
A life away
Shores with distant, golden sands

Then as I sit here with my mind
I pray that we will always find
Someone to love,
Our one true love
Who'll take away the sands of time

[Twilight]

Azerane.. That one was amazingg. :Ooo:
Totally loved that one.. I can relate to it.

[King Simba]

Gah, you guys are so good at poetry. If there was ever to be a competition between each other's poems, I swear I'll lose. xD My poetry skills are appalling.

Never-the-less, awesome stuff everyone. =) I enjoyed reading some of those. ^^

[Azerane]

Originally posted by Twilight
Azerane.. That one was amazingg. :Ooo:
Totally loved that one.. I can relate to it.

Thanks so much Twilight it's much appreciated, I'm glad you liked it. ^^

And thanks KS, sometimes with poetry it can be hard, I find that unless I have the right inspiration my poems are simple crap!

[lion_roog]

I like that poem, Azerane...even the title is cool...

"Waiting to Sleep"

Sitting at the bedside
Of myself in a past life
Living a lie for the last time
Time to heat a heart that's been cold from the start
Night to night no day in sight
The stars are bright but there's no moon tonight
Surviving is a work of art
Staying alive while remaining hard
But maybe I'll see the light
Some day
When the blood doesn't run a river a many miles long
Filled with the songs of a many people gone
Filled with the screams of a many mother's lungs
Filled with the sounds of guns and the sounds of a hundred thousand sons
Oh God
As we bathe in the blood of our brothers, fathers, sisters and mothers
Acting like today maybe it'll all go away until we forget it anyway
Because that's our society
The streets are painted red, up to the trees the weeds are even dead
The only way to the light is to fight because down each alley is another sad story
Where an eye for an eye can soon lead to homocide quicker than you can scream "Where am I?"
Where there's no time to cry and ask God why
Becase the only time you get to rest is when you dead
Silly dreams in your head of a life without death
And peace to those who now rest
Covered in blood it's time to head home with a bullet through your chest
And when you arrive and it's time to return all you've done in life
Tell God that in hell there are still those of us who look to the sky
and ask for mercy and freedom from the thoughts that haunt our minds
Sitting at the bedside
Of myself in a past life
Waiting to finally sleep
A rest in peace

[Azerane]

Thanks Roog

And I must say, that poem is amazing! I love the way it reads and everything, it was so real and yeah... One of your best works in my opinion.

[lion_roog]

"Your Worst Enemy"

I hear the steady clicking of clocks
Tick tocks heard from block to blocks
Watch your back cuz the hit is on
In a second you can be good as gone
Gone in the wind, rewind till ya see the sign
No time, until ya hear the rhyme, oh my
20 thousand bullets in your back this time
It's whack how they react to an act
Done in perchance only one instance in history
Misery can deal out much more than you or me
So don'y screw with me because I know your ancestry
One call can make your family half of what it used to be
Are you getting used to me, or am I still outside your realm of reality
Ready to strike in spite taking your life one day at a time
I'm deeper than crime, not seen by eyes, the most despised
Until the day comes and the loud thunder thunderous sound of drums
Comes from the skies above signaling the end of my reign of slums
Breaking what you thought you made, taking what you thought was saved
Every day making lies come to reality, making nature succumbed to my abnormality
You can't escape, you can only run through a land raped, innate of a ghetto landscape
Entranced by the chance to land one bullet through your head at the thought of ending up dead instead
Bred to bleed for devious deeds done dirty in the deepest story
Not boring, but too gory, indeed it's been a long journey, so show me what you got for me
The dust is building, storms outside waiting for the air to start chilling, the feeling!
Death painted up on your ceiling as you look up from sleeping, it's creepy!
In the deepest parts of your heart you know that the day draws nearer
Show no fear or you'll end up giving yourself up and your life will end up messed up
Now I know you're still stressed enough, but it's gonna soon blow up with no where to hold up
Wanted in five burrows by five men who just want to hurt you, what you go through!
And worst of all I'm your worst enemy, creating nasty scenarios with no heroes
Waiting for the day you slip up and give up capped in the back with two slugs
No luck when your own conscience is giving you nonsense and you're wanted
Die now or face the consequences of actions done in hard times
When things seemed fine sold some crack and smoked some lines
Now you're framed for killing the big man's main man, no chance
To clear your name because some things just don't go the ways we had dreamed
Before we deemed what was supposed to be would be, but didn't so we need to make a new plan
Before the aftermath of what's at hand gets you canned, landed in some alleyway with no chance to survive either way
Life's funny that way
I'm your worst enemy

[lion_roog]

"Mike"

Based on a true story...


I wanna tell you a story
A story about Mike
A story stuck in time
A story with a little rhyme


Now Mike had his life together
Played ball, he had nothing better
But maybe a girl sooner or later
A fly honey and soon he'd date her
Moesha, he found and married her
Worked a ten hour shift in his own business
No more ghetto games like he used to witness
No more selling crack, getting jacked
No more running from the cops, and getting popped
Life was good, but still he resembled the hood
It takes only one night to go back to what you known all your life
Mike liked to chill in a bar after working hard
With his homies he'd buy a round for all
But one dude was talking ****
Walked up to Mike half drunk, swung and missed
Mike let him know his distress with his fist
All over was a bloody mess
But this is the ghetto, no one is gonna snitch
For snitches end up in ditches
A week later, same bar same hater
Mike saw him, same dude from a week ago
Dude looked like he had a chip on his shoulder
He got bolder, walked over to Mike, room got colder
All it took was a second to take a life that's lasted decades
Dude shot Mike point blank range in the face
Brains all over the place
And that's how this story ends

[Azerane]

Was just trying to throw a song together the other day, didn't get very far and yeah, it's not that great anyway, but yeah...

There you are at the end of the world
Sitting in your mind thinking of that girl
And you wonder, will it last?
Here we are, at last together again
Holding hands like we used to way back when-
We were younger, these years past.

But where are you when the sun goes down?
And where are you when my tears pour out?
And where are you? I wanna shout



...as I said, I didn't get very far, heh.

[LunarCat]

that's awesome Azzy! really great

[unregistered user]

Some Hillarious malay poem:
Jikalau roboh Kota Melaka, Balik Muar

Turun tangga naik tannga, Lif Rosak

Bersatu kita teguh, bercerai kahwin lagi

If Melacca is destroy, go back to south (malay is on north)

Downstairs Upstairs, Lif out of service

Together we strong, separate just married another one

:woeisme:

[Azerane]

Originally posted by Lunarcat
that's awesome Azzy! really great

Thanks Lunarcat, I didn't think it was so great but that's cool that you like it anyway

[Kovu The Lion]

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By: Kovu The Lion

These games that I play,
These words that you say,
All affect me in this way,
Unbelievable for the way I feel this very day,
My love for you will never cease
I will love you always and forever,
Until the day that I decease.

I try so hard to satisfy you,
But it seems whatever I do..
Nothing is ever good enough for you, My love
Our love used to fly, and soar through the sky like a dove.

Now we sit together at this bench.
We thought our love would be a sinch (sp?)
But never did we know it would be this hard.
I had to act stupid, one little mistake, and now I'm singing like a bard..

I gave up on you once baby..
Could you please forgive me.. yes no.. Even maybe..?
I love you is that alright..?
I still want to be with you every night...

Laying by your side
This decision in life we could never decide..
It seems we went astray..
And with that.. Our love went away..

Please forgive me baby..
I can't live without you...
I want to be with you baby...
For the rest of my life.. I do I do...

Now the time has come..
Your bus is here and now I wait,
And wonder about our love and what it had become...
I listen to the words "Good Bye" they repeat over and over in my mind
I can't quit thinking about you as you ride away..

And so I sit here now, This very day
Awaiting your return to this spot
and maybe somehow some way
We can forgive each other and start over,
Because all I want.. Is for you to be my lover..

[Azerane]

That's a nice poem KTL, sad but nice

[Kovu The Lion]

Thank you Azerane ^^ Someone inspired me to write it.

[Azerane]

Originally posted by Kovu The Lion
Thank you Azerane ^^ Someone inspired me to write it.

You're welcome. And that's like me I guess, someone or something inspires my poems, I can't write a poem without inspiration from something.

[Kovu The Lion]

Originally posted by Azerane
You're welcome. And that's like me I guess, someone or something inspires my poems, I can't write a poem without inspiration from something.

Exactamente >) I can't write, Sing, do anything unless I see something about someeone, Or feel a certain way Xx

[LunarCat]

lovely Kovu! fantastic! but as Azzy said, quite sad.....

And now, a little something from me.

Time:

It is said
That a woman sits in the window
And stares out at the world
She doesn't eat, drink, or do anything
But watch
Watch time pass by

Noone knows how long she's been there
Some say years
Others centuries
Milleniums

Mothers taunt their children saying
She's watching you
The children don't listen
But always take care when they pass her house

She's a legend, a myth they say
But she's there
Always watching
Never losing a second

[Azerane]

That's well written Lunar, and a cool subject too, it's really nice. Though I think the first word may have a spelling error :Psst:

[Kovu The Lion]

Thankies and awesome poem ^^ TIME STANDS STILL FOR NO ONE

[SIZE=small]Not even for women...[/SIZE]