Alright people, I haven't made a thread in a while it seems, time I did

Alright.. so here's the thing.. I can write poetry,or so I've been told by some of my friends I've made here at college. But what I find irnoic, is that I really don't care for poetry. Eh.. so I just wanted to know if you guys think that my poems are poetry or not.

Poem #1~
Reality Check
Reality has left me barren.
Society has confused me.
Love has forsaken me.
Friends have left me stranded.
Family has gone before me.
You killed me.
Death consumes me.
I die.
I wake up.
To do it all again.

Poem #2~
Lonely Mr. Rain
I saw Mr. Rain sitting by himself one day.
Most would say that he seemed very sad.
But I was determined to make him glad.
So I walked outside that rainy afternoon.
To sit on the bench with Mr. Rain.
?What is the matter ole? Mr. Rain??
He turned with a gloomy disposition.
?Young Miss Sunshine has left again.?
?Every time I visit, she leaves me here.?


I have more, but those are two of my most recent ones. What do you guys think?