They do? All of them? Wow, heh
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They do? All of them? Wow, heh
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Just read the last two pages...and I liked what I read..I'm not going to comment on each one individually because I am lazy...
Two I wrote in the last week or so..
This one I wrote in about ten minutes..
"Looking Out My Window"
Looking out the window
In a city filled with strangers
Filled with people meaning nothing to me
All I can see is emptiness
The streets lined with sidewalks
Houses and lofts
Apartments and garbages
Asphalt below me
In this city
Waiting for some beauty
Everyday as I look out my window
Telling myself any day now
Waiting for her
Looking out my window
Waiting for her
The window to my heart
Leading to every other part
Of my body and soul
Void and now a hole
Leaving me to look out the window
Waiting for her to love me
Waiting for my baby
In the meantime the streets remain barren
Docile and uncaring
Void of emotions
Waiting like a flood the size of the oceans
To enter my heart and give it something
Because right now I have nothing
Waiting for a signal from her
To see if she cares
If she can even see that far
Into my heart
Realizing that it's deeper than the Pacific
Grander than the Stars
Bigger than the universe
And it's all for her
But I don't think she can see it
Until then, I'll be waiting
Looking out my window
"Loving You"
Through the fires that burn beside us
In the world of pain and misery
Something always comes to me
And takes it all away
Makes it all okay
Love from my lady
My baby
Bringing mercy to a soul in need
Taking away all that harms me
Making everything seem so lovingly everyday
So heavenly
The light hits your eyes
Makes them sparkle like the night sky
Takes the darkness out of night time
Makes anytime the right time
To be loving you
The sound of your voice
Is like singing to my ears
Soothing the saddest tears
I could spend a thousand years
Loving you
The world beside me
Falls around behind me
Taking life after life
And leaves me realizing
What it is inside me
That keeps me going
And that's your love
Taking hit after hit
Bloody nose and busted lip
Broken bones and messed up hip
Coming home to you
Makes it all worth it
Because your love will always heal me
Gives me the strength to keep going
The feel of your breath on me
Gives me a feeling that you'll always love me
Something so heavenly
Has got me saying
I will always love you
I see you in my dreams
It's as if it seems
Fate is telling me
That I should be
Always loving you
Take my hand
And dance with me
Pull your body close to me
And listen to my heart beat
And realize that you love me
Look into my eyes
And realize
That I will always be there for you
That I wont let anything hurt you
I'm the man that's perfect for you
And dance with me
Into the moon light
Of a night that lasts forever
Forever loving you
wow, i actually had tears in my eyes. *sniffles* thats really good roog, really emotional (in a good way)
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Aww... Roog that second poem is so nice yet so sad. Very well written.
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EDIT: Damit I double-posted! Sorry about that
Wasn't going to post this one but y'know. I'm not sure if it's finished yet... but I wrote these three verses and just nothing else would come. Who knows.. maybe it is finished, I'd like to write but just can't seem to. I thought up the whole poem on the way to work on the bus the other day... had to make sure I memorised it for when I got home so I could write it down, heh.
25/1/06
Turning in the night
I feel my lover, warm
A symphony of delight
Embraced by my loves form
I open up my eyes
To gaze upon my love
As his body deeply sighs
Content, we're up above
Embraced by my lover
The hours drift away
I could never love another
And so I'm here to stay
That which you manifest is before you.
That's a beautiful poem Becca, coming along very nicely.
Thankyou PatI appreciate it, glad you like it.
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I must agree with kintaru...Very nice..
Don't I know it Roog.
And you're welcome my love.
Hehe, thanks Roog =)
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thats exellent!
man, i gotta stop reading these, i always get so teary eyed, like this
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hehe, aww... well there's nothing wrong with getting teary eyed at poems. To me it just means that a poems good if it can inspire such emotion, so thankyou
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Hey, Roog! You should put those poems into use, because they're really good, man! And by "use" I mean poetry contests. And this goes for a lot others on this thread as well.
....Hey, Azzy! Really like the last one. = )
Thanks Sonique, I really appreciate it. Glad you like it =)Originally posted by Sonkakee
....Hey, Azzy! Really like the last one. = )
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awws ^^ *tears up* Its amazing Azerane, you are very talented, I have a question for you
Does your school (if you are in one) Run a newspaper? Mine does and they allow you to put your stuff into the paper (poems, stories, etc) ^^
and I put mine, just wanted to know if you did xP
It's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice.
Thanks so much KTL. And to answer your question, our school didn't have a newspaper, my school was only very small. We had a fortnightly newsletter but that wasn't for that sort of thing. So I never had any poems put in anything. And now even if my school had a newspaper I couldn't put them in because I'm finished school, hehe.
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Thank you Sonique...and I tried to enter one, but it was too long...I'll have to make a shorter one and enter it into a contest...
New one from me..."Message"
Can you hear the rain
Raining down from the clouds above
giving love to the ground below
Hoping that things will grow
Giving it time to sow
the seeds of time and good deeds
Living life like we need the peace
Instead of the disease we call industry and money
Hoping things will be good someday
But until then murder seems to be here to stay
Wars come and go like it's a game
Played for the richest and the name
of the religion you speak and praise
But when will love be here to take it's place
I don't know, let's just end the craze
Bring together every race
And make this a better place
To raise our childen like we care again
But instead I hear the sounds of death
Getting louder as the sickness spreads
Killing and murder will never rest
As we fight to keep our heads
Hoping to forget the past
Like there's a pill we can take to end it fast
But the first step is in our backyards
Where things tend to be backwards
Down right ugly copped by bastards
Can't seem to get a break to rest us
As the life of the slums test us
And oppress us into thinking we can make it
But instead the money we earn is taken
And we will never see it again
Instead you see it in the richest's porches
Four course meals while there's people starving
Twenty thousand dollar pocket watches
Why do we spend like this
Time to remember why we have to stop this
And stop to look at our reflection
And let the light in
And love like we know what it's like again
Hoping to get things right again
Every life has a part in this
We just have to take the action
To lead ourselves in the right direction
Better vote in the next election
The last time we learned our lesson
Now we got to send the message
that we must stand up and make a difference
No more excuses in this
Let's change the future with this
And it all starts with our own consciences
Nice message in that one Roog, I completely understand why you called it Message, hehe. Good stuff as always.
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I made a christmas poem.
Sorry if it's stupid
Oh I just go nuts at christmas,
no, I really go insane,
temporary state,
but you'll meet your fate
if you see me christmas day.
thats good!
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