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    Thanks.
    I'll write the next part later. =)

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    Yay! He told her!!! Great part KS!

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    More of the story...sorry, not much tonight. I was doing other things. =)

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    Katai continued to offer Asha his loving embrace that he could offer her. Asha also hugged him and kept him close before looking into his eyes, ??back to the food now.? She giggled and whispered to him before taking her harms from around his neck. She purred lovingly to him.

    Katai looked down deeply into her eyes; he then took both of his paws off her waist. He then stood beside Asha and cuddled her, ??we don?t want it to be cold now do we?? he smiled to her and gave her another quick kiss on the lips. He then stood aside to let Asha walk in front. Asha began to walk back to their table, Katai followed.

    Asha sat down at their table again, so did Katai. They both picked their knife and fork up and began to tuck into their food. About 15 minutes later, they had both finished their meal. Katai looked across to his girlfriend, hopefully soon to be his wife, ?I don?t really think we?re bothered in dessert now are we??

    Asha looked over at her boyfriend, ??nah, I?m all full up now anyways.? She smiled over to him before grabbing hold of her handbag again.

    ?You ready to go now then?? Katai laughed a little at Asha, ?I?d better say goodbye to Twilight and Nura first?? Katai turned around to Twilight and Nura, ??well, we?re off?? he grabbed hold of his jacket and put it on over his Man Utd shirt, ??pretty cool out there tonight. Later?? he smiled to them both. He then turned back to Asha, ?Let?s go love.? He started to walk slowly towards the entrance; he turned and waited for Asha. Asha caught up with him at the entrance and put her right harm through his left harm, just like all the other couples that were at the restaurant on that night. She leaned closer against Katai, purring happily, ??I love you so much Katai.?

    ?Later Katai and congratulations!? Twilight called after Katai before turning back to Nura. He smiled to her and had a drink of his pint of beer.

    Katai put his paw on top of hers and held her paw, gripping it tightly. He carried on walking out into the car park with his new girlfriend. He was so happy this very night and didn?t want anything else to spoil his and Asha?s relationship which would hopefully turn out to be a successful one.

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    lol make Twilight shout congratz in the restaurant

    great part KS as always
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    Short and sweet...

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    Hehe, Great part KS!! Me likey!

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    Here's more of the story. LKS requested that he and Nura should be mentioned more.

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    Meanwhile back inside the restaurant Twilight put his pint of beer down on the table after he had drank the last bit. He then looked over to Nura, ?So?? he paused and stood up, ??time to go now then love?? he looked around at the other couples who were still staring at him after he called after Katai. He went red in the face.

    Nura giggled a bit at Twilight blushing, ??Twilight, why are you blushing?? she smiled to him and stood up herself.

    Twilight continued to look at the others before looking back over at Nura, ??it?s nothing. Come on, let?s go now anyway.? He picked his car keys up that he left on the table and walked towards the entrance. Nura followed and quietly walked up behind Twilight before wrapping her harms around his neck to surprise him, ?Surprise!? she laughed and kissed him on the cheek.

    ?Nura?you sneaky, little?? Twilight laughed also before kissing her back and holding her paw. He noticed Katai and Asha over near the other side of the car park near where Katai?s car was. Twilight couldn?t help but speak, ?Hey again you happy couple.? He grinned over to them, ?Good timing huh? Just finished straight after you.? He walked over to them with Nura. Nura was a little shy but followed Twilight anyway.

    The new couple were kissing until Twilight spoke. He immediately disturbed them so Katai moved his muzzle away from Asha?s and looked at Twilight. He smiled to him and put his harm around Asha, keeping her close, ?Hey again Twilight. Didn?t think I?d see you again tonight. We were just about to go ourselves?? he laughed a little at Nura blushing, ?Oh Nura, don?t be shy. I?m only your boss at work.? He kept his harm around Asha and kept holding her close before looking back to Twilight, ?New girlfriend??

    ?Yeah?we?ve been going out for a few weeks now. We haven?t seen each other for about a week or so, so we decided to do the same as what you and Asha did. She?s just a little shy that?s all?? Twilight put his harm around Nura, cuddling her and looking down to her, ?Don?t be shy?? he laughed a little and kissed her on the cheek.

    Nura continued to blush but actually said something, ?Don?t worry Twilight?I?m not that shy.? She kissed him back, cuddling into him also.

    After a few moments of silence, Katai looked up to the sky which was clear, he then looked back over to Twilight, ??got the time??

    Twilight smirked at his friend; ?Katai, you?re not short of a few bob so why don?t you have your own watch?? he laughed jokingly and rolled his sleeve up on his long sweater to check the time, ??the time now is 10:35pm according to my watch. Time for home now I think?that?s where you?re heading now right??

    ?No, I?ll be dropping Asha off back at her house before going back home myself. Asha?s tired?I can tell.? Katai looked down to Asha who looked back up to him.
    ?Don?t be silly?? she stepped away laughing a little before opening the door to Katai?s car and stepping into the passenger seat. She closed the door after her.

    Katai rolled his eyes and chuckled a little, ??she?s so eager to take a ride in my baby?? he smirked to Twilight, referring to his car.

    ?Yep?? Twilight grinned, ?Nura seems eager too.? He looked over to Nura who had already taken the keys from Twilight and had already unlocked the car herself. She was now sat in the passenger seat. Katai and Twilight were now alone outside in the car park.

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    Yay! More Twilight!!

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    yesh me likes ^^ keep it coming...and do what Lucy says only joking u do wat u wish ^^
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    Since the story isn't based on Twilight, no, but I'll keep Twilight in the story for most of the scenes.

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    LKS, you are SO spoiled!

    KS, this is a great story.
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    Thanks, and yeah, Twilight wants a lot. jk
    So, I'm currently on my 21st page of the story at the moment. Here's the next part...

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    After a few moments of saying nothing, Katai held his car keys in his grip and looked at Twilight, ?So?? he paused looking over to his car again, ??you planning on going out anywhere else sometime this week or next week??

    Twilight immediately replied, ?Not really?why? Planning on arranging something??

    Katai shook his head, ?No, I was just wandering. We could meet up or something on Sunday night. That?s when I?m having a special works party. Don?t worry, it?s really just for employees but since you?re my friend and Nura?s partner I?ll make an exception.? Katai smiled to Twilight, before yawning himself, ??better get going now anyway. It?s late and I?ll be too tired to drive at this rate.? He looked back over to his car before looking back over to Twilight, ?Later?for the second time.? He laughed a little and opened the door to his car and climbed in.

    ?Later!? Twilight smiled to Katai before walking over to his car also.

    Meanwhile, Katai shut the door behind him and inserted the keys into the ignition. He then turned on the engine before looking over to Asha, ?You look tired love. I?ll get going now?? he put the car into reverse and reversed out of the car parking bay.

    Asha looked across to Katai before yawning herself, ?I am actually dear?no need to rush though. I?ll be fine.?

    Katai looked across at Asha; ?Whatever you say?? he smiled to her and turned the radio on since there were no CDs inserted. He then drove out of the car park at a slow and steady pace.

    On the journey home, Asha fell asleep in the passenger seat and Katai was getting tired also. He turned the music up a little to try and keep him awake; it obviously worked. All of a sudden, the purple Rover belonging to Kingy cut Katai up which caused Katai to touch his breaks hard and suddenly. Katai immediately belted his paw on the horn, ?What the hell does he think he?s playing at?!!? he then noticed the registration plate number again, ?K1 NGY?? he said to himself, ??that?s that idiot who nearly caused me to have an accident the other day??

    Kingy didn?t seem to be getting a move on since there was an HGV in front. Katai had to keep touching his breaks because Kingy had been tail-gating the HGV in front. Katai sighed and rolled his eyes, he looked across at Asha who was peacefully sleeping.

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    Hmm, no more comments. Well, here's some more of the story anyways. Twice the amount to read now.

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    Katai continued to touch his breaks, he thought out loud to himself, ?I?ll overtake them both in a minute.? He pulled out slightly into the middle of the road and looked beyond the HGV, he saw it was clear and began to overtake both Kingy and the HGV.

    Kingy looked out of the windscreen as Katai overtook. He smirked to himself before pulling out into the road also and following Katai past the HGV.

    Katai put his foot down on the long stretch of road that headed straight towards the motorway. He began to travel a little over the speed limit because of his tired-ness, ?I really shouldn?t be driving?? he yawned and looked back into his mirrors. He saw Kingy shooting up behind, ??and god knows what speed he?s travelling at?? Katai?s reactions were slower than usual, ??SLOW DOWN!? he shouted and touched his breaks hard before looking through his mirrors again. Kingy nearly hit Katai?s bumper.

    Asha quickly opened her eyes and woke up, ?What happened?? she asked Katai before looking through the wing mirror on the left hand side, she sighed and rolled her eyes, ??I hate it when they tail-gate like that.?

    ?Tell me about it. That guy just nearly caused me to have an accident. It doesn?t really help since I?m tired and it?s late?? Katai rolled his eyes also before yawning again, ??I?m sorry Asha but I?ll have to drop you straight off at your house. Time for a bit of sleep when I get back I think.? Katai looked into his mirrors again and Kingy seemed to be keeping a little more breaking distance than before. He then looked out straight at the road in front of him which was dark and was only lit up by Katai?s headlights and the cat-eyes in the centre of the road, ??I?m not too keen on these country roads as it is.?

    Asha looked across to Katai, ?That?s fine. I?m tired myself anyway.? She yawned, ?Will you be paying a visit tomorrow?? she smiled to him.

    ?Sure, I will be. Tomorrow?s my day off so I will be paying a visit.? Katai smiled to Asha before looking back and keeping an eye on the road ahead.

    Asha smiled and sat back in the soft, leather passenger seat. She relaxed and left the driving to Katai who seemed to know where he was going. She closed her eyes slightly.

    Katai took the turning towards the motorway and Kingy was still following. He made an indication and turned onto the slip road which led straight down to the motorway. He looked in his mirrors to check to see if it was clear. He then turned onto the inside lane before switching to the outside lane.

    However, Kingy was still on the inside lane and put his foot down until he was travelling at a faster speed than Katai. He began to overtake on the inside.

    ?Now, look. He?s now trying to overtake on the inside lane?? Katai dropped his speed so Kingy could overtake. Kingy then pulled out into the outside lane, leaving Katai behind, ??and there he goes. Travelling at 100MPH perhaps?? Katai began to put his foot down again and travelled at 80MPH. It was now near on 11:15pm and Katai was tired. He was hoping to return home soon and could tell Asha was tired also.

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    Hehe, sorry I was away so I couldn't comment on your last entry. Its still going great!

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    Yep I'm enjoying it too.

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    Thanks guys.
    I'll be writing more of the story later. After I've completed the next part, I'll post it here like always. =)

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    i'm liking the story KS!

    but being the Disaster Film fanatic I am, i see a disaster coming soon...

    but that's just my mind.

    Can't wait for the next park KS!

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    Alright, next part's finished. =)

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    After driving along the motorway for around another 20 minutes or so, Katai tried his best to keep his eyes fully open. He caught a glimpse of the signpost for the exit. He turned into the inside lane and joined the slip road to exit the motorway. He decreased his speed a little as he reached a roundabout. Katai took a quick look and glance towards the right and shot straight out. All of a sudden, the purple Rover shot round the roundabout just as Katai accelerated. Katai saw the purple car in the corner of his tired eye but it was too late. A big thud and crunch was all Katai heard this very moment. Kingy?s car had knocked Katai?s car to the other side of the road with great force and Katai got thrown back into his seat. He then flung forward and hit his head on the steering wheel.

    Asha however, woke up the very moment Kingy?s car collided with Katai?s. She ended up knocking her head on the dashboard with the force of the collision. She was now unconscious.

    Kingy got out of his car and looked across to the damaged car before looking back at his own. All of the side of Katai?s car had been bashed in and he could easily notice the damage which was done to his. Kingy decided to help by taking his mobile phone out of his pocket and calling the emergency services. There was no answer.

    Kingy then put his phone back in his pocket and ran across to the other damaged car. He looked down at the ground before looking up again. He then looked across at his car again.

    Katai slowly opened his eyes before looking around and his breathing rate had increased since the collision. He then looked across at Asha who was knocked unconscious. Blood was pouring down her face and some blood slid down Katai?s face too. He looked down to see his t-shirt and jacket stained with blood. He wasn?t sure on what to do at this moment. He put his hand down into his pocket and took his phone out. He turned the phone on and scrolled down the phone book list. He decided to phone Twilight to see if he could do anything.

    Twilight had just dropped Nura off at her house when his phone rang. He switched his indicators on and pulled over before answering Katai?s call, ?Hello??

    Katai took deep breaths between each of the words spoke, ?It?s me?Twilight, Kat-ai.?

    Twilight noticed how Katai was breathing and the way he was talking, ?Katai is there something wrong? What?s happened??

    Katai looked across to Asha before answering Twilight?s question, ??we need help?we?ve just been involved in a collision. Any chance?in coming ov-ver here??

    ?Yes Katai. Where are you now?? Twilight asked concerned about his friend.

    ?Just off at junction 10 - off the M60.? Katai?s breathing was still heavy. He found it quite difficult to speak.

    ?I?ll be right there, just hang on in there.? Twilight put his phone into his pocket and put his foot on the accelerator. He headed towards the M60.

    Katai put his phone down also and looked across at Asha, ?Don?t worry my love, we?ll be alright? I promise....? He felt a tear slide down his face as he rubbed his paw against her face, wiping the blood away, ??I?ll never let anything bad happen to you, never.?

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    aww, the disater happened

    or is there worse to come?

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    There may be worse to come... Just depends. You'll see later on in the story.

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