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    "Friday Night Out." (Story)

    Alright, so I'm really in the mood for fan fic/story writing right now so I started writing this story about 2 hours ago. It features Katai, Twilight, STL and a few others. I've got quite far at the moment but I'll be continuing to write it. Tell me what you think up to now.

    And yeah, the characters are anthros in this story.

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    Friday Night Out

    It was a normal Friday night. Katai, who was a young lion in his early 20?s, with a reddish, brownish mane, light brown coloured fur and orange muzzle was sitting on his couch watching the football match between Manchester United and Liverpool on Sky Sports 1. He just came home from a hard day at work in his new Mercedes Convertible that he just recently bought. Katai was a very rich lion since his parents were very rich. He also had a very good job. He owned a large business in the city of Manchester. His father passed this business onto him when he was 19 years of age. After the match had finished, a 2-1 win, Katai sat up and looked around sighing to himself. He picked his car keys up again from inside the drawer and decided to go out for a drive. He picked up the house keys and put his jacket on before going outside and locking the door to his ?500,000 mansion. He put the house keys in his pocket before getting the car keys out of his other pocket. He inserted the car keys into the lock on the car door and opened it. He climbed in and sat inside his blue Mercedes Convertible, turning the radio on and inserting one of his CDs since he didn?t like listening to the radio that much, he decided to listen to his rock and dance CDs. He put the keys into the ignition and put the car into reverse gear and reversed out and drove out of his long and large drive. He turned his headlights on and turned out onto a country road.

    ?A drive into town, or just a drive in the countryside?? he asks himself, ?Hmm?I think I?ll have a drive into the city?? he drove down the country road until he saw a sign for the motorway, he took that turning and accessed the motorway putting his indicators on. A lioness driving in a red Renault Clio held back to let him in and flashed him, Katai flashed his indicators and hazards to thank her.

    He smiled to himself, putting his foot down as he accessed the motorway and turning his music up. He drove along the motorway for about 7 miles to enter the city of Manchester. The red Renault Clio with the registration ?YP05 LEA? felt quite fine driving in the same lane as him, right behind him. Of course, this car was very different to Katai?s. Katai had his own registration plate, ?K4 TAI? and had a much more expensive car than this lioness? car. He flicked his indicators as he took an exit off the motorway, the exit straight into Manchester.

    He looked in his mirrors and saw the Clio follow him off the motorway, he laughed a little to himself, ?She seems to have followed me all down the motorway. Does she like my car or something?? he looked in his mirrors again, turning the music down a little. The lioness in the Clio seems to be keeping her distance and is quite content driving behind Katai. She was heading to Manchester also.

    Katai had to touch his breaks because a battered, old green Ford Fiesta had cut him up and couldn?t get a move on. Katai dropped his gears and looked into his mirrors again. The Clio was still keeping her distance but a car was now pushing her along. Katai touched his breaks again since the Ford Fiesta doesn?t seem to be getting a move on. He sighed and drops his speed to 35Mph, the speed the Fiesta was travelling at.

    The Fiesta turned the hazards on and pulled over to let Katai and the others overtake. A young lion about 15 was driving the Fiesta and he was still in his adolescent years. He was travelling to Manchester also but let the others pass before pulling back out onto the road again. Katai put his foot down again and increased his speed to 60Mph, the national speed limit. The lioness in the Clio travelling behind put her foot down too. The car behind the Clio was a black sporty-style Smart car with ?funky moon and star? transfers on with the registration plate, ?TW1 L1GHT? increased the speed too. A lion around in his late teens was driving this car. He continued to tail-gate the lioness in the Clio though. Katai kept his speed up to bang on 60Mph.

    Katai continued to drive at the same speed for about 5 miles or so until he came up to a round-a-bout. ?Manchester?straight on.? He said to himself, looking up at the sign post. He turned his music up again and looked for traffic that was coming around the round-a-bout. It was clear so he drove straight forward. The battered, old Ford Fiesta only just caught up with the Smart car.

    A few drops of rain fell from the sky. Katai switched the wind-screen wipers on as more rain poured down. He looked into his mirrors again, still seeing the red Clio behind him. He smiled to himself, driving along at a steady and safe pace. The Smart car had turned into the Garage for some petrol. Katai didn?t need any petrol since he had just filled his car up before he went to work in the morning. The rain started to pour down faster so Katai switched his wind-screen wipers on to the ?fast? mode.

    As Katai entered the outskirts of Manchester, he looked around for somewhere to get some food. He spotted a place where there were various restaurants, bars and such. He flickered his indicators as he turned and stopped at some traffic lights. Whilst he was waiting for the lights to change, he opened up the drop down and took out a little piece of chewing gum. He threw the wrappers into the ash tray and looked into his mirrors once more at the lioness. He put his paws on the steering wheel again; ready to go when the lights changed. The Smart car turned into the same turning, a couple of cars behind to Clio.

    The lights changed to go and Katai was the first one waiting at the lights. He put his foot on the accelerator and drove into the car park, looking for a space to park. He turned his wheel and parked in a space next to a silver Rover 25. He turned the engine off and took the car keys out of the ignition. He climbs out his convertible and stepped outside in the rain. Katai wasn?t bothered if he got wet because he didn?t mind the rain. The Smart car and the Clio ended up parking up in some spaces further down. They also got out of their cars. The lioness who was driving the Clio grabbed hold of her handbag and locked the car doors. She stared over to Katai thinking he was a handsome looking lion. She put her umbrella up and ran to take shelter.

    The lion who was driving the Smart car stepped out and took his keys out of the ignition. He looked over to Katai thinking that he looked familiar. Katai was busy sorting things out in the boot. The lion locked his car up and walked over to where Katai was. He stopped directly next to him, ?Do I know you?? he asked curiously.

    Katai stopped and looked up before shutting the boot, ?Twilight?? he asked thinking that the other lion looked familiar.
    ?Yeah, that?s me?long time, no see. Haven?t seen you in a while Katai.? Twilight smiled to Katai giving him a hug, ?Where you get the nice ?toy? from?? he laughed a little, referring to Katai's convertible.

    ?Toy?? Katai looked at Twilight with a confused expression before realizing what he meant, ?Ah, my car.? He grinned to Twilight, ?I bought it for ?35,000 from Pride Lands Car Sales. Figured it was time to get shut of the Jag.? He referred to his 2001 Jaguar he had before.

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    Sorry about the long start. I'll post the rest later once I've written it.

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    I like it! So many cars... and so much driving



    I usually don't get to read many anthro stories.

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    Thanks a lot for reading. =) Here's another part I've just been writing...I'll post it in parts.

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    Twilight gasped in shock, ?Whoa, you aren?t short of any cash are ya? I bought my car for around 12 grand?where do you work now anyway? Long time, so many questions?? he laughed a little.

    ?No, I guess not.? Katai grinned to Twilight throwing his keys up and down in his paws, ?I own a large business in the city. ?K-A-T-A-I Corporation?. Yes, I?m a very busy lion??

    The rain began to slow down and all of a sudden a purple Rover 220 GSi shot in at around 50Mph straight through the traffic lights which were on red, Cradle of Filth was playing full blast. The registration plate on this car was ?K1 NGY?. Katai gave the car a dirty look as it passed, ?Now that?s some bad driving, don?t you agree Twilight?? he turned towards Twilight looking at the car park up in a car parking space taking up at least two spaces. The engine turned off and the door opened, a tiger stepped out of the car turning the music off. He locked the car up and walked into KFC.
    ?I do agree?? Twilight looked at the tiger as he walked into KFC.

    Katai sighed, ?Well, would you like to come and get something to eat now? I?m starving myself, didn?t get chance to have anything to eat before I went out. I just finished watching the match between Liverpool and Man U and I was bored, so I decided to come out for a drive.?

    Twilight smiled, ?Yeah, sure. I?m hungry myself. Haven?t had anything since lunch and it?s?what? 9pm now.? He heard his stomach rumble a little.

    Katai smiled and started to walk towards KFC, ?Will KFC do fine? Don?t worry, I don?t just go to classy restaurants all the time and I don?t order the ?A La Carte? meals all the time?? he smirked to Twilight.

    Twilight laughed, ?I didn?t think that Katai. KFC will be great.? He smiled to his friend walking over to the KFC entrance with him.

    Katai opened the door before entering KFC with Twilight; he saw the tiger stood in the queue ordering a Zinger Tower Meal. Katai looked up to the lioness who was driving the Clio again and he smiled up to her. The lioness smiled back at him. Twilight tapped him on his shoulder.

    ?We?re moving up?wakey wakey?? he chuckled to him as the queue moved up one. The tiger carried his food to a table and sat up near where the lioness was sitting. Katai moved up one space, ?Sorry, just a little tired?? he yawned.

    The queue continued to get shorter and Katai and Twilight were soon at the front, they began to order their meals, ?Hiya, can I have a chicken fillet burger please with a Pepsi?? he turned to Twilight, ??what about you??
    Twilight thought of what to order, ?Hmm, I?d like to order 4 pieces of chicken with a coke please...?
    ?How much?? Katai smiled to the lioness at the cashier.
    ??6.10 then please?? the lioness smiled to Katai.

    Katai took his wallet out of his pocket and handed her the cash over. After they received their meals, they went and sat at a table next to the lioness who was currently talking on her mobile phone.

    Katai unwrapped his chips and opened his BBQ dip, ?So, have you been watching the footy recently?? he started to eat his chips before opening his burger and taking a bite out of it.

    ?Yep, I watched the game between Man U and Liverpool. I?m guessing you watched it too?? Twilight started to eat some of his chicken and took a drink out of his coke.

    ?Yeah, I watched it before I came out actually. What a game it was? and it was a winner.? He smiled to Twilight before eating his burger and chips until he finished them all off.

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    You make Kingy look like such a rebel good stuff KS

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    No problem.
    Here's a bit more of the story...that's me finished for tonight I think.

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    ?Sure was a great game?? Twilight smiled before finishing his chicken portions off.
    ?I think it?s time to move on now anyway?getting a little late?what do you think?? Katai smiled to Twilight.

    All of a sudden, the lioness dropped her tray on the floor. The wrappers, drink and burger box were all over the floor, ?Just hold on a sec?? Katai looked over to Twilight who was putting the rubbish away. Katai walked back over to the lioness who started to pick all the wrappers, boxes etc. by herself, ?Let me help you with that miss.? He smiled to her, helping her pick the wrappers and boxes up and putting it back onto her tray. He stands up again, the lioness smiled up to him, ?Thank you.? She stood up also looking into his brown eyes; ?I think I followed you on the motorway?? she smiled to him, ??what?s your name??

    ?The name?s Katai?what?s yours? You look familiar, I?m sure I?ve seen you around before?? Katai stared at the familiar lioness, ??you look very familiar??

    Twilight looked at them both in the background, ?Here we go?? he laughed a little, staring at Katai and the lioness.

    The lioness blushed a little and giggled, ?I?m Asha?I know where I?ve seen you?you?re all over the city on advertisements?you?re always advertising your business. We probably met in the past or something??

    Katai smiled, ?Well, nice talking to you Asha. I hope you find those advertisements useful?I know, there?s so many of them.? He looked back over to Twilight, ?Well, I?ve gotta go now but I?m sure we?ll meet again.? He smiled to her again, ?I?ll spot you in your Clio again maybe?? he laughed a little walking back towards Twilight.

    Asha laughed a little and blushed again, before giving him a slight wave with her paw, ?Goodbye.?

    ?Let?s go?? Katai walked out of KFC with Twilight, ??do you have the time?? he asked his friend.

    ?It?s 9:53pm according to my watch?? Twilight looked at his watch, ?Sometimes it runs a little slow though. You?d better check the clock in your ?toy?.? He laughed a little before getting his car keys out of his pocket.

    ?Guess I?ll be seeing you later then. Nice seeing you again?it was a pleasure speaking to you again. I?ll call you later on probably?we can arrange a night out.? Katai smiled over to Twilight before taking his car keys out of his pocket.

    ?Yeah, sounds great. Just don?t call me after 11:30pm. I?ll be tired out by then?? Twilight winked to Katai before inserting his key in the car door lock, ?See ya mate.? He smiled to his friend.

    ?Don?t worry, doesn?t take me too long to get home from here anyways.? Katai laughed a little to Twilight before opening the doors to his car too and climbing in.

    Meanwhile, the tiger who was previously in KFC who was called ?Kingy? came out of the KFC entrance and got into his car again. He reversed out of the car parking space like a maniac. Katai was reading through some of his papers from work when all of a sudden he heard Kingy?s car zoom past. He looked into his mirrors, ?Sheesh, that tiger again?? he rolled his eyes and sighed before putting his car into reverse and he reversed his convertible out of the car parking space.

    At the traffic lights, Katai was one behind Kingy?s car. Katai turned his CD player on again and turned the volume up. He yawned a little and started tapping his paws on the steering wheel to the music. The lights changed to green and Kingy was now up a Ford Fiesta?s back-side. The young adolescent lion from earlier was driving this Fiesta. Kingy tried to over-take, so did Katai. Katai was now up Kingy?s back-side and he kept touching his breaks, dropping down his gears.

    They reached a stretch of road on the way to the motorway and the adolescent lion who was called Simba couldn?t get his speed up so Kingy and Katai began to over-take at the same time. Katai had to swerve to the side, Kingy had to break. Katai?s car went skidding to the other side of the road. Kingy?s car stopped. Katai got thrown back in his seat with the force. The Ford Fiesta continued down the road, Katai wasn?t pleased at all. He quickly got out of his car, ?What did you think you were doing you maniac?!? he walked to Kingy?s car window. Kingy looked at Katai, ?First off, it wasn?t my fault. Secondly, you were behind me and you started to over-take after me?? he smirked to him, ?I think you?re the bad driver good sir.?
    ?Me? Look?ah forget it.? Katai sighed in anger as he walked back over towards his car before climbing in it again.

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    Sadly, had this little accident taken place in the US, Kingy would have been correct. Here, it is illegal to over-take, or as we say; pass, more than one car at a time.

    All I can say is that this story contains some major road rage! I love it!
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    Yes I agree with you, I was almost in a accident beecause a driver did that. But any way. The story has a good edge to it. Keep Going King Simba!

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    You wrote in American. Bad!

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    i don't think she did Neph
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    "...with a confused expression before realizing..."

    Yah-huh.

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    thats probably just the spell checker Neph, cause mines like that *shrugs*
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    very nice KS, lots of cars.

    Neph, not in American, take it from an American

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    The fan-fic is very interesting to say the least. I rather enjoyed reading the first part, and will read the second part soon.

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    Thanks mates.
    Here's some more of the story which I just wrote out over the last half hour to 45 minutes...I'll probably do a bit more later on, if not, I'll post more tomorrow. =)

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    Katai rolled his eyes at Kingy who started to speed down the road again, ?Driver?s today? Sheesh?? he slammed his car door still in anger. He put the key in the ignition and switched the engine on before putting his car back into reverse. He put his foot down as he travelled down the stretch of road keeping at a speed of 60Mph. He carried on driving at the same speed for around 5 miles until he reached the round-a-bout again. He sighed after he reached a large queue at the round-a-bout. At this moment, he started to think of Asha again and he smiled to himself. He knew she had something very special inside her and he knew she must?ve had feelings for him. Of course, he didn?t know this lioness too well, but he didn?t want to forget what he did to help her, and he wanted to see her again sometime. Perhaps he could arrange a day or night out sometime? The thoughts stayed deep in his mind. He headed straight on at the round-a-bout and headed towards the motorway. He put his foot down again and kept to the national speed limit. Katai turned his CDs on again. A few miles down the road, just as he was about to enter the motorway he looked in his mirrors. A car behind was flashing its lights. Katai touched his breaks not sure what was happening. The car continued to flash its lights, ?What!?? Katai looked back into his wing mirrors at the car behind. He flicked his indicators and pulled over into the hard shoulder. The car behind pulled over also. It was the red Clio from earlier, Asha?s car.

    Katai stepped out of his car and shut the door before seeing the registration plate ?YP05 LEA?. Asha stepped out of the car and smiled to him, ?I wanted to see you again?? she purred a little and locked her car doors. She walked over to Katai slowly and gave him a small kiss on the cheek. Katai was shocked at the very moment Asha kissed him, he then looked at her straight in the eyes, ?Whoa, thanks.? He smiled a little, ?You made me pull over into the hard shoulder for that? Well, I guess it was worth it?thanks Asha. You?re a real good friend?? he gave her a small hug laughing a little, ??would you like to join me out for a night out sometime? Let?s say, tomorrow night after I come home from work?? he offered kindly.

    ?Sure?? she purred a little again, ??that?d be great. Would you like my address now?? she smiled to him getting a small notebook and a pen out of her handbag.

    ?Yeah, that?d be better for me actually. I?ll come and pick up tomorrow night at let?s say?eight. Would that be fine with you?? he smiled to her politely.

    ?That?d be great?? she started to write her address down in her notebook, resting on her car?s bonnet for support. When she had finished writing her address down, she handed the piece of paper over to Katai;

    Address: 145 Rosebank Drive
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    Tel No: 345678


    Katai gratefully took the piece of paper, ?You live in Bury eh?? he looked up to her, looking down onto the piece of paper still reading what she had written, ??nice.?

    Asha giggled a little, ?Yeah?that?s where I live. I thought that putting my post code was pretty un-appropriate??

    Katai smiled to her before putting the paper in his pocket, ?Well, I?ll be there to pick you up at eight. I?ll probably call you tomorrow morning whilst I?m at work?or I might call round to your house if I need to give you any more information.?

    ?Sure?that?d be fine. I?ll see you around eight then?? she smiled to him before walking back over to her car and opening it yet again, ?Later?? she purred a little before climbing back into her vehicle, turning the engine on and putting her indicators on before pulling out of the hard shoulder. She tooted her horn and waved at Katai. Katai gave her a slight wave back and smiled before climbing back into his car. He closed his door and turned the key to turn his engine on. After that, he put his seatbelt on and turned his indicators on looking for any un-coming traffic. All seemed clear so he put his foot down and got up to the motorway?s speed limit which was 70Mph. He drove for several miles until he reached his exit and he joined a narrow country road which led down to his mansion. He switched his full beam on and drove at a steady pace for about a mile. The time was now 10:34pm and Katai was tired. He turned his steering wheel and opened the electric gates to access his property. He yawned and drove down the driveway until he parked outside his garage. He switched his engine off and climbed out of his vehicle. He closed the door and locked his car up so it was safe and secure. He put his paw in his right pocket and took out his house keys. He walked up to the front door and inserted the key into the lock on the door before turning it clock-wise and opening it. He closed the door behind him and locked the door. He then walked down his hallway and hung his jacket up in the cloakroom before entering the lounge and sitting down on his couch. Katai looked for the remote control and switched the TV on and started to watch a wildlife documentary on Animal Planet.

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    lol love Asha pulling over Katai that made me laugh
    Its all good KS keep it up
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    Thanks mate. Btw, just in case no-one's seen this in the 'Post Your Art' thread, here's a pic I finished earlier that's based on the story... =)

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    I'll carry on with my story tomorrow and I'll try to write loads more.

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    great pic!

    love the story,
    just a question about culture, do you Brits always keep your house keys separate from your car keys?

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    Originally posted by Lunarcat
    great pic!

    love the story,
    just a question about culture, do you Brits always keep your house keys separate from your car keys?
    Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on the pic.

    In answer to your question I'm not sure. I know that my parents keep the house keys in seperate places to the car keys. Maybe that's just my parents...

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    Here's a bit more of the story that I just finished writing. I'll continue to write more later... =)

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    The time seemed to take ages to pass and Katai yawned to himself as the adverts came on. He looked at the time and realised it was 11:35pm. He knew he had to be up early in the morning for work so he decided to turn the TV off and head upstairs to bed. He turned the light off in the lounge and walked down the hallway to the sweeping staircase that lead up to the first floor where his bedroom was. When he finally reached the top of the staircase he entered his large bedroom which was one of the many master bedrooms. Katai preferred this one because it was the front room and it had a large window and balcony. He turned the light on and took the piece of paper which was previously in his jacket pocket and which he received from Asha out of his trouser pocket. He smiled to himself, clenching the piece of paper tighter in his grip. He couldn?t stop thinking of Asha and he was looking forward to their night out after work the next day. After that, he got undressed and closed his bedroom door after turning the lights out on the large landing. He climbed into his king size, four poster bed and turned his bedside light out. He peacefully drifted off to sleep and he started to have a good dream. He slept peacefully that night.

    The next morning the sun?s rays shone through Katai?s blinds and curtains. It was 6:45am and it was time for Katai to wake up for work. Katai?s duvet had been pushed off in the night and he realised that it was a bit chilly. He opened his eyes and realised it was morning. He tilted his head towards the window watching the silhouettes of the sparrows and blackbirds fly by his window through the curtains. Katai yawned and sat up in his bed. He rubbed his eyes and stretched to get his muscles working. He climbed out of bed and started to get dressed. He put his navy trousers on, and then he went over to his wardrobe where he kept his shirts and ties along with his smart jackets and suits for work and special occasions. He looked through his wardrobe and took a navy blue and white tie out. He then looked for a decent shirt to wear and match. After he decided, he took a white shirt out and began to put it on. He then walked over to the mirror and put his tie on and tied it around his neck keeping it fairly loose. He then grabbed hold of his jacket and decided to go downstairs for a quick breakfast before leaving the house at 7:30.

    Katai entered the kitchen and opened the fridge. He looked through the food and drinks that were stored in there and took out half a dozen lion eggs. He thought to himself, ?An egg butty will do fine?? He quickly fried the eggs and put them into a crusty bread roll. He then sat down at the table in the dining room and started to eat his breakfast. He looked at the time which was now 7:20. He had to leave in 10 minutes so after he finished his sandwiches he headed up to the en-suite bathroom in his room. He had a wash and brushed his teeth until they were white as pearls. He grinned to himself in the mirror and smiled before heading back downstairs and picking up his car keys and putting his other jacket on top. After that, he picked his briefcase up that he needed for work. He took the house keys out of the door and closed the door behind him. He walked over to his car and unlocked the doors before opening the boot and putting his briefcase in. He then climbed into the driver?s seat before turning the key in the ignition switching the engine on. Since it was a nice day, Katai decided to take the hood down and drive without it on. He put his car into reverse and drove out of his drive before coming up to a give-way junction on the country road outside his house. He looked towards the right direction for any on-coming traffic. He waited for a black Vauxhall Astra to pass before turning left towards the motorway. He put his foot down again and travelled at 60Mph. He had to touch his breaks a couple of times because some adolescent lion cubs were pushing each other onto the road on their way to school. He slowed down to speak to them, ?Kids, you should know better than pushing and shoving around a road especially on a road like this.? He told them firmly with a stern tone to his voice, pulling over beside the adolescents.
    ?It was him?? one of the adolescent lions pointed to his friend. Katai interrupted before any of the others could speak.
    ?I don?t care who it was, you shouldn?t be doing it anyway. You really should know better.? Katai looked at the adolescents before putting his foot on the accelerator pulling back out onto the road and heading towards the motorway continuing on with his journey to work.

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    nice one KS
    can ya tell me why friday?
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