Don't rush it, KS. Real art and talent takes time.:cheese: It is coming along great.
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Don't rush it, KS. Real art and talent takes time.:cheese: It is coming along great.
Here's some more of the story finished.
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About 25 minutes later, Katai approached the outskirts of Manchester. He turned right towards an industrial area where there were a load of car sales places. At this time, he drove at a slow and steady pace just so he could find the Pride Lands Car Sales. He saw a sign in the distance which looked familiar. After approaching the sign closer, he realised that he had arrived at the Pride Lands Car Sales. He turned into the car park and looked for a decent car parking space. He parked next to a silver Lexus and turned the engine off. After sitting in the car for a few minutes sorting out some things like documents and money in the drop down, he opened the door and climbed out closing the door behind him.
He pressed the ?lock? button on his keys and began to slowly walk across to the entrance of the ?accident repair centre?. After entering, he looked around for the front desk. After spotting it he quickly walked across and stood at the desk. A young-ish lion, around Katai?s age turned around, ?Can I help you??
?Yes, actually. I?m Mr. Kagunda; I recently bought a car from you.? Katai answered the car salesman.
?Right?? the salesman nodded, ?Let me just put it up on the computer??
Katai nodded and waited patiently for the salesman?s response.
After loading it up on the computer, the salesman responded, ?Ah? you bought a Mercedes CLK Convertible on the 15th May for ?35,000. Is that right??
Katai nodded, ?Yeah, that?s it. I?ve actually came to get it fixed. I was involved in an accident last night ? the vehicle itself is still driveable. I think it just needs a new door and possibly a new wing fitted.?
?Right, well I shall get one of the repair men to come and have a look at it. By any luck, if the damage is exactly like you described then it should be finished either by the end of today or early tomorrow.? The salesman smiled to Katai.
?Right well you have my phone number so when it?s all repaired, just give me a ring. I?m pretty sure I?ll be able to get either my girlfriend or my best mate to give me a lift.? Katai began to walked out the exit and waited patiently outside for his best friend, Twilight to arrive.
good part KS glad you got some more done ^^
Thanks LKS. It shouldn't be that much of a problem over the next few weeks in getting new parts finished so hopefully, I'll be able to write a lot more than usual. ;)
Well seeing as I'm off school for Summer now, I've wrote a bit more of the story. Hopefully I'll be able to update the story more over the next 6 weeks or so... However, on the 23rd August, I'll be going on holiday so no updates on the story for two weeks. Sorry...
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After a few minutes or so, the sound of a car was heard by Katai. His ears twitched and Twilight?s car began to be visible in the distance. Katai moved further out to the edge of the kerb so that Twilight could see him. Twilight turned his indicators on and pulled into the side to pick his friend up, ?Haven?t been waiting long then?? Twilight asked curiously as Katai climbed into the passenger seat.
?Nope, just had a talk with the car salesman and he says that it might be done either today or tomorrow. Off to Asha?s house now?? Katai looked at Twilight and answered his question, ??you do know about the work party tomorrow night don?t you? Did I tell you about it??
Twilight didn?t look at Katai and kept focused on the road ahead, ?Yeah, you told me about it the other night. What kind of party is it if may I ask??
?It?s a special works party. It?s usually a great night out but the only catch is; you have to dress formal. It?s just the way it works. Nura will be going too.? Katai answered Twilight?s question, ?You don?t have to dress too formal, like in a tux or anything like that.? He chucked a little.
?Ah, well I?m quite sure I can find something out of the wardrobe which is formal enough.? Twilight smirked, still keeping focused on his driving, ?Where does Asha live again??
?Forgot already?? Katai smirked, ?Well, she lives on Rosebank Drive in Bury? it?s a street full of new, detached houses. Quite a nice area actually.? Katai wasn?t a snobby lion despite his large fortune and he always acted like a normal lion would, whether he was rich or not. He didn?t care.
A few moments later, Twilight turned into Rosebank Drive, ?What number is it?? he asked Katai curiously.
?Number 145. It?s pretty easy to find, just look for the red Clio.? Katai smirked, ?That?s what I always do.?
good, good, KS. keep writing! ^__^
very nice KS ;)
KS...AMAZING. I felt like i was reading a book from one of my favourite authors, You made that Story like an author would have ~~Meaning its really good~~~ but anyways, Can't wait to see more of it, Liked the pic btw nice car ;) Took me a while to read it all hehe
~Kovu The Lion~
Sorry for the lack of updates on the story all. I shall get round to doing that in the next few days, don't you worry. ;)
oooooh YAY! *dances*
"previously on Friday Night Out" :p
So 5 days later, I update the story. Enjoy! ;)
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Twilight nodded to Katai?s suggestion and kept his eyes on the road as well as looking for the red Clio in the drive. He spotted it a few houses away, ?Ah, I see what you mean now Katai.? He smirked and patted him on the shoulder.
Katai smiled to Twilight as he patted him on the shoulder, ?Thanks for the lift buddy. You?re a really good friend.?
Twilight slowed down as he pulled up in front of Asha?s house before turning to Katai, ?It?s no problem.? He smiled and patted him on the shoulder again, ?Your girl is waiting.? He caught sight of Asha at the door waiting for Katai, ?I?ll give you both a lift to the hospital if you want.? He turned back to Katai and smiled at him.
?Thanks Twi. I?m guessing Asha doesn?t want to drive today anyway with what went on last night and all.? His ears drooped down for a second or two before perking up at the sight of Asha. He quickly opened the door and climbed out of Twilight?s car. He ran up the path to her house and hugged her tight, ?I?m back Asha.? He kissed her a couple of times before looking back over to Twilight who had just got out of the car.
?Twilight will be giving us a lift to the hospital.? Katai smiled to her, ?I?m assuming you and Twilight have met?? He looked at her with a curious expression.
Asha looked at Twilight for a moment or two and recognised him from the night before, ?Oh yes, I remember.? She smiled to him, ?Thanks for everything. You?re so helpful.?
Twilight smiled to Asha, ?It?s no problem. Katai?s a great friend of mine and I?d always be delighted to do favours for you and him once in a while. Afterall, that?s what friends are for.?
Katai laughed a little to what Twilight had said, ?Been friends for a long time now haven?t we Twi?? He gave him a friendly hug, ?Hey, at least you?re not the one with the wrecked car now are you?? He smirked to him as he turned back to Asha.
?We should get to the hospital and get it over with.? He rubbed his paw down the side of her face once more before looking back at Twilight, ?Ready to take us Twi??
?Sure.? Twilight smiled to them both as he put his paw in his pocket and took his car keys out, ?Anything for friends.?
ooooooo looking nice ;) Your writing keeps me on the page :lol: takes alot too since I have a hard time paying attention. Great writing so far KS! :hugs:
I'm a fan :ayecapn:
yay new part of da story :cheese: good job good to see ya writing again :D.
Glad you're enjoying it guys. ^^
LKS, I'll try and write some more before I go away and I shall include the "17 year old hottie" as you call her too. :lol: ;)
Well, isn't that convienent! You take a break from writing, at the same time I take personal leave!
As good as always. Oh, and this reminds me that I have to update my website! lol, thanks!
Got chance to right a bit more. Once again, enjoy. ^^
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Katai nodded to Twilight. Twilight began to head to where his car was parked. He pressed one of the buttons on his keys to unlock the vehicle again. He smiled to them both as they both got in on opposite sides.
Twilight climbed in at the drivers? side and inserted the keys in the ignition, ?So are you two ready? All fastened in?? He smirked as he looked back at them both who were sat in the two back seats.
?Sure we are.? Katai winked to Twilight and faced to look out the window.
Twilight looked at Katai before smiling and facing at Asha. He then turned around and put the key in the ignition. He put his foot on the gas and pulled out into the road, ?So, tell me Asha, what you do for a living?? He spoke to her as he kept focused on the road ahead.
?Well I work as a secretary at some offices in the city. I?ve been working there for a couple of years or so now. I decided to take that job after I finished University.? Asha replied to Twilight?s question as she looked out the window herself.
?Ah, I see. So you?re not really doing something as complicated as Kat?s job then.? Twilight laughed as he said this. He slowed down as he approached some traffic lights.
?Well would you even call it complicated Katai?? He smirked as he turned round to Katai since they were in a stationary position.
?Not exactly. Most of the day I?m just sat in an office which is right on the top floor.? Katai laughed a little, ?Maybe tomorrow night I?d enjoy myself more with the workers.? He smirked to him.
?So it?s tomorrow night then huh?? Twilight smiled to Katai as he kept his eyes on the traffic lights which were changing to green. He put his foot on the accelerator again.
?Yeah, tomorrow night. I?ll tell you later Twi.? Katai smirked and looked out the window again. He sighed as he looked at the British countryside.
Yay! More story! Hehe. :D It's still great KS!
great job KS ;) keep it comin!
Sorry for the large gap guys. Been busy with loads and loads of other stuff. Either way, hope you guys enjoy the next part.
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Twilight nodded at Katai?s response as he continued to keep his foot on the accelerator. He also kept his eyes on the road as he continued to cruise along at a steady speed. He saw the sign posts for the hospital and decided to follow them hoping that he wouldn?t get caught in a traffic jam. He looked back at Katai and Asha as he stopped at some traffic lights and smirked at them both. Katai continued to look at the area surrounding them. He then looked back at Twilight, ?What? Something fascinating you about me or something?? He smirked to him as he playfully ruffled up his quiff on the top of his head.
?No, no? just wondering why you?re not saying much. That?s all.? Twilight smirked to Katai, ?And Kat, stop that.? He prodded him playfully before sitting back down in the drivers? seat and continuing to focus on his driving.
?The hospital is only over there so is it alright if I just drop you two off? See, I need to go round to Nura?s house and see her. Need to tell her about tomorrow night.? Twilight looked back at both Katai and Asha as he pulled up near to the hospital?s main entrance, ?I?ll be back to pick you both up, alright??
Katai looked towards Asha and nodded his head slightly before looking back at Twilight, ?Yeah, sure? that?s fine by us. I shall call you on your mobile when we come out.? He smiled to him as he climbed out of one side of Twilight?s car. He then waited for his girlfriend to climb out the other side.
Asha smiled and did the same, ?Thanks Twilight.? She smiled to him politely before stepping up onto the kerb along with Katai.
?I?ll see you guys later then.? Twilight smiled to them both as he winded his window back up again. He then put his shades back on and put his foot on the accelerator. Within a few minutes, he had disappeared down the road.
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Originally posted by King Simba
kerb .
great job KS! :D :cheese: