Shenzi looks good, from what I can see! It's a little small, but from I can make out, she looks nice, looks just like her.
I think the only thing that is bugging me about my characters a little bit now is that my outlines of the characters I drew look a little thick compared to everyone else. I do everything still the only fashioned way and trace my sketch onto a new piece of paper so it's clean, then ink it with a pen, to get it ready to scan to color. I need to get thinner pens. I hope they don't look too out of place with all the other characters. But with them being shrunk down to make this collab, hopefully they will all look fine together. I do want to make thinner outlines, I have thought my outlines look a little thick sometimes.
I think I am going to send a reminder to Mufasa again today... I hope that doesn't bother her because she said she would remember. But I think it would be a good idea.