Don't rush it, KS. Real art and talent takes time.:cheese: It is coming along great.
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Don't rush it, KS. Real art and talent takes time.:cheese: It is coming along great.
Here's some more of the story finished.
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About 25 minutes later, Katai approached the outskirts of Manchester. He turned right towards an industrial area where there were a load of car sales places. At this time, he drove at a slow and steady pace just so he could find the Pride Lands Car Sales. He saw a sign in the distance which looked familiar. After approaching the sign closer, he realised that he had arrived at the Pride Lands Car Sales. He turned into the car park and looked for a decent car parking space. He parked next to a silver Lexus and turned the engine off. After sitting in the car for a few minutes sorting out some things like documents and money in the drop down, he opened the door and climbed out closing the door behind him.
He pressed the ?lock? button on his keys and began to slowly walk across to the entrance of the ?accident repair centre?. After entering, he looked around for the front desk. After spotting it he quickly walked across and stood at the desk. A young-ish lion, around Katai?s age turned around, ?Can I help you??
?Yes, actually. I?m Mr. Kagunda; I recently bought a car from you.? Katai answered the car salesman.
?Right?? the salesman nodded, ?Let me just put it up on the computer??
Katai nodded and waited patiently for the salesman?s response.
After loading it up on the computer, the salesman responded, ?Ah? you bought a Mercedes CLK Convertible on the 15th May for ?35,000. Is that right??
Katai nodded, ?Yeah, that?s it. I?ve actually came to get it fixed. I was involved in an accident last night ? the vehicle itself is still driveable. I think it just needs a new door and possibly a new wing fitted.?
?Right, well I shall get one of the repair men to come and have a look at it. By any luck, if the damage is exactly like you described then it should be finished either by the end of today or early tomorrow.? The salesman smiled to Katai.
?Right well you have my phone number so when it?s all repaired, just give me a ring. I?m pretty sure I?ll be able to get either my girlfriend or my best mate to give me a lift.? Katai began to walked out the exit and waited patiently outside for his best friend, Twilight to arrive.
good part KS glad you got some more done ^^
Thanks LKS. It shouldn't be that much of a problem over the next few weeks in getting new parts finished so hopefully, I'll be able to write a lot more than usual. ;)
Well seeing as I'm off school for Summer now, I've wrote a bit more of the story. Hopefully I'll be able to update the story more over the next 6 weeks or so... However, on the 23rd August, I'll be going on holiday so no updates on the story for two weeks. Sorry...
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After a few minutes or so, the sound of a car was heard by Katai. His ears twitched and Twilight?s car began to be visible in the distance. Katai moved further out to the edge of the kerb so that Twilight could see him. Twilight turned his indicators on and pulled into the side to pick his friend up, ?Haven?t been waiting long then?? Twilight asked curiously as Katai climbed into the passenger seat.
?Nope, just had a talk with the car salesman and he says that it might be done either today or tomorrow. Off to Asha?s house now?? Katai looked at Twilight and answered his question, ??you do know about the work party tomorrow night don?t you? Did I tell you about it??
Twilight didn?t look at Katai and kept focused on the road ahead, ?Yeah, you told me about it the other night. What kind of party is it if may I ask??
?It?s a special works party. It?s usually a great night out but the only catch is; you have to dress formal. It?s just the way it works. Nura will be going too.? Katai answered Twilight?s question, ?You don?t have to dress too formal, like in a tux or anything like that.? He chucked a little.
?Ah, well I?m quite sure I can find something out of the wardrobe which is formal enough.? Twilight smirked, still keeping focused on his driving, ?Where does Asha live again??
?Forgot already?? Katai smirked, ?Well, she lives on Rosebank Drive in Bury? it?s a street full of new, detached houses. Quite a nice area actually.? Katai wasn?t a snobby lion despite his large fortune and he always acted like a normal lion would, whether he was rich or not. He didn?t care.
A few moments later, Twilight turned into Rosebank Drive, ?What number is it?? he asked Katai curiously.
?Number 145. It?s pretty easy to find, just look for the red Clio.? Katai smirked, ?That?s what I always do.?
good, good, KS. keep writing! ^__^
very nice KS ;)
KS...AMAZING. I felt like i was reading a book from one of my favourite authors, You made that Story like an author would have ~~Meaning its really good~~~ but anyways, Can't wait to see more of it, Liked the pic btw nice car ;) Took me a while to read it all hehe
~Kovu The Lion~
Sorry for the lack of updates on the story all. I shall get round to doing that in the next few days, don't you worry. ;)
oooooh YAY! *dances*
"previously on Friday Night Out" :p
So 5 days later, I update the story. Enjoy! ;)
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Twilight nodded to Katai?s suggestion and kept his eyes on the road as well as looking for the red Clio in the drive. He spotted it a few houses away, ?Ah, I see what you mean now Katai.? He smirked and patted him on the shoulder.
Katai smiled to Twilight as he patted him on the shoulder, ?Thanks for the lift buddy. You?re a really good friend.?
Twilight slowed down as he pulled up in front of Asha?s house before turning to Katai, ?It?s no problem.? He smiled and patted him on the shoulder again, ?Your girl is waiting.? He caught sight of Asha at the door waiting for Katai, ?I?ll give you both a lift to the hospital if you want.? He turned back to Katai and smiled at him.
?Thanks Twi. I?m guessing Asha doesn?t want to drive today anyway with what went on last night and all.? His ears drooped down for a second or two before perking up at the sight of Asha. He quickly opened the door and climbed out of Twilight?s car. He ran up the path to her house and hugged her tight, ?I?m back Asha.? He kissed her a couple of times before looking back over to Twilight who had just got out of the car.
?Twilight will be giving us a lift to the hospital.? Katai smiled to her, ?I?m assuming you and Twilight have met?? He looked at her with a curious expression.
Asha looked at Twilight for a moment or two and recognised him from the night before, ?Oh yes, I remember.? She smiled to him, ?Thanks for everything. You?re so helpful.?
Twilight smiled to Asha, ?It?s no problem. Katai?s a great friend of mine and I?d always be delighted to do favours for you and him once in a while. Afterall, that?s what friends are for.?
Katai laughed a little to what Twilight had said, ?Been friends for a long time now haven?t we Twi?? He gave him a friendly hug, ?Hey, at least you?re not the one with the wrecked car now are you?? He smirked to him as he turned back to Asha.
?We should get to the hospital and get it over with.? He rubbed his paw down the side of her face once more before looking back at Twilight, ?Ready to take us Twi??
?Sure.? Twilight smiled to them both as he put his paw in his pocket and took his car keys out, ?Anything for friends.?
ooooooo looking nice ;) Your writing keeps me on the page :lol: takes alot too since I have a hard time paying attention. Great writing so far KS! :hugs:
I'm a fan :ayecapn:
yay new part of da story :cheese: good job good to see ya writing again :D.
Glad you're enjoying it guys. ^^
LKS, I'll try and write some more before I go away and I shall include the "17 year old hottie" as you call her too. :lol: ;)
Well, isn't that convienent! You take a break from writing, at the same time I take personal leave!
As good as always. Oh, and this reminds me that I have to update my website! lol, thanks!
Got chance to right a bit more. Once again, enjoy. ^^
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Katai nodded to Twilight. Twilight began to head to where his car was parked. He pressed one of the buttons on his keys to unlock the vehicle again. He smiled to them both as they both got in on opposite sides.
Twilight climbed in at the drivers? side and inserted the keys in the ignition, ?So are you two ready? All fastened in?? He smirked as he looked back at them both who were sat in the two back seats.
?Sure we are.? Katai winked to Twilight and faced to look out the window.
Twilight looked at Katai before smiling and facing at Asha. He then turned around and put the key in the ignition. He put his foot on the gas and pulled out into the road, ?So, tell me Asha, what you do for a living?? He spoke to her as he kept focused on the road ahead.
?Well I work as a secretary at some offices in the city. I?ve been working there for a couple of years or so now. I decided to take that job after I finished University.? Asha replied to Twilight?s question as she looked out the window herself.
?Ah, I see. So you?re not really doing something as complicated as Kat?s job then.? Twilight laughed as he said this. He slowed down as he approached some traffic lights.
?Well would you even call it complicated Katai?? He smirked as he turned round to Katai since they were in a stationary position.
?Not exactly. Most of the day I?m just sat in an office which is right on the top floor.? Katai laughed a little, ?Maybe tomorrow night I?d enjoy myself more with the workers.? He smirked to him.
?So it?s tomorrow night then huh?? Twilight smiled to Katai as he kept his eyes on the traffic lights which were changing to green. He put his foot on the accelerator again.
?Yeah, tomorrow night. I?ll tell you later Twi.? Katai smirked and looked out the window again. He sighed as he looked at the British countryside.
Yay! More story! Hehe. :D It's still great KS!
great job KS ;) keep it comin!
Sorry for the large gap guys. Been busy with loads and loads of other stuff. Either way, hope you guys enjoy the next part.
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Twilight nodded at Katai?s response as he continued to keep his foot on the accelerator. He also kept his eyes on the road as he continued to cruise along at a steady speed. He saw the sign posts for the hospital and decided to follow them hoping that he wouldn?t get caught in a traffic jam. He looked back at Katai and Asha as he stopped at some traffic lights and smirked at them both. Katai continued to look at the area surrounding them. He then looked back at Twilight, ?What? Something fascinating you about me or something?? He smirked to him as he playfully ruffled up his quiff on the top of his head.
?No, no? just wondering why you?re not saying much. That?s all.? Twilight smirked to Katai, ?And Kat, stop that.? He prodded him playfully before sitting back down in the drivers? seat and continuing to focus on his driving.
?The hospital is only over there so is it alright if I just drop you two off? See, I need to go round to Nura?s house and see her. Need to tell her about tomorrow night.? Twilight looked back at both Katai and Asha as he pulled up near to the hospital?s main entrance, ?I?ll be back to pick you both up, alright??
Katai looked towards Asha and nodded his head slightly before looking back at Twilight, ?Yeah, sure? that?s fine by us. I shall call you on your mobile when we come out.? He smiled to him as he climbed out of one side of Twilight?s car. He then waited for his girlfriend to climb out the other side.
Asha smiled and did the same, ?Thanks Twilight.? She smiled to him politely before stepping up onto the kerb along with Katai.
?I?ll see you guys later then.? Twilight smiled to them both as he winded his window back up again. He then put his shades back on and put his foot on the accelerator. Within a few minutes, he had disappeared down the road.
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Originally posted by King Simba
kerb .
great job KS! :D :cheese:
Here's some more I decided to write for part of last night and part of this morning.
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All that was on Twilight?s mind at this point was Nura. He really couldn?t stop thinking about her. He decided to do a ?U-turn? in the road after remembering where she lived. From what he could remember, she didn?t live in a very rich area. However, her family only had limited amounts of money and that?s why she had to get out to work earlier than usual. Twilight was planning to go further into his relationship with her but since he was 19 at this point and she was only 17, his decision was made to be a tough one. He just shook his head slightly at this point as he continued to concentrate on his driving. He recognised the name of the residential area where Nura lived on a nearby signpost, ?Cheetham.? He said to himself as he quickly glanced at the signpost. He decided to take a turn at this point and head in that direction.
Within a few more minutes, Twilight caught sight of some small houses nearby. These houses looked pretty old and run down. However, it?s what the residents here could afford. He remembered Nura?s address from the day he and Nura met. He smiled as the thought of the number ?12? came into his head from previous moments. He then dropped his speed to look out for the correct address. Most of the houses along this area weren?t very maintained and needed a lot of work doing to them. The window frames were rotten and the doors weren?t very good. He started to drive past the numbers which started at number 5. On this particular side of the road, the numbers went up in twos. He accidentally drove past number 7 and pulled up outside number 11, ?Ah shoot.? He sighed as he looked back. He had to walk back a couple of houses.
Once he reached number 7, he looked up and around. This house wasn?t exactly the best; the garden was overgrown, one of the front windows were bordered up and the panel on the back door had been kicked in. Twilight held his car keys firmly in his grip at this point since he had no intentions of staying in that area too long. He dodged some nettles which were in the garden before reaching the front door. He looked inside and saw a light on. He wasn?t sure at this point whether the light was from Nura or her parents. He quickly put his keys in his pocket before knocking on the door hoping for Nura to answer.
And yet, here's some more of the story. Yesh, I seem to be on the roll lately with this story. LKS wanted me to post this bit so here ya go. ^^
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Within a few more minutes, a moving figure was visible inside. It did look sort of like Nura?s figure which made Twilight relax a bit, ?Who?s there??
Twilight stood closer to the door as she said this, ?It?s me ? Twilight.? He spoke in hesitation not knowing who would answer the door to him. He stepped back a little as he noticed the door starting to open.
The door opened fully and to Twilight?s surprise, it was Nura who answered the door. His face lit up in a smile, ?Nura.? He smiled to her.
Nura?s face lit up in a smile too, especially at the sight of Twilight, ?Twilight? w-what are you doing here?? She asked still smiling to him.
?I just decided to come round after taking my friend and his girlfriend to the hospital. They were involved in a bad crash last night.? Twilight sighed at the thought before looking back up at Nura, ?I couldn?t live a day without seeing you.? He rubbed his paw down the side of her face, ?You?re too beautiful for me to miss.? He laughed softly.
Nura blushed and giggled at Twilight?s remark, ?Oh Twilight, you?re so kind.? She softly kissed him on the cheek and wrapped her arms around his neck as she cuddled into him, ?I?m glad you came. I was actually getting lonely here myself.? She softly whispered into his ear as she ran her paw through his mane, ?I love you.?
Twilight stepped back a few steps before Nura cuddled him and kissed his cheek. He smiled as she kissed him and cuddled into him, ?I wouldn?t ever dream of leaving without saying that I didn?t love you.? He turned his muzzle slightly towards hers and looked into her beautiful eyes, ?Kiss me.? He moved his muzzle closer to hers.
Nura turned her muzzle towards Twilight?s too and also looked into his eyes. The words sort of startled her for a moment so she just pulled back and moved slightly away from Twilight.
?Nura, what?s the matter?? Twilight asked looking slightly concerned for her. He moved slightly closer to her.
Nura looked towards the side for a moment and stood in the doorway, ?Twilight, come in.? She smiled to him slightly as she held the door open for him.
Twilight looked at her for a few moments before stepping into the house. Nura closed the door behind him and turned the key to lock it for safety which she always did whenever she was in the house alone, ?Don?t worry, my parents aren?t back yet.? She looked at Twilight as she walked into the lounge, ??They sort of left it a mess as you can see.? She blushed a little in embarrassment, ?If I knew you were coming, I would?ve at least attempted to clear it up a little.? Her ears drooped slightly and she looked down as she sat down on the old, springy sofa, ?I?m sorry Twilight.?
?You don?t have to be sorry about anything Nura. It?s not your fault.? Twilight smiled to her slightly as he sat down next to her on the sofa. He sat back and relaxed before looking at Nura once more and putting his arm around her just like any couple would.
Twilight?s loving comfort cheered Nura up a little, ?Thanks Twilight.? She smiled to him as she leaned into him a little closer and rested her head on his chest. She closed her eyes slightly as she relaxed in the arms of her lover.
Twilight smiled to her as she rested on his chest, ?No worries. Anyway, I came to actually tell you about something as well as give you some loving company.? He stroked the top of her head softly.
Nura looked up at Twilight before moving her head away from his chest, ?And what might that be?? She smirked to him as she sat up.
Triple post, I know but since I haven't had much to do, I decided to write and update the story more regularly. It's been dead for far too long I think.
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Nura looked at Twilight as she remained to stay sat up, ?Oh really?? She laughed a little, ?Guess I?ll be coming with you then.? She started to playfully play with Twilight?s mane as he stopped stroking the top of her head, ?And as far as I know, I?m not doing anything.? She smiled to him.
?Right.? Twilight nodded his head slightly, ?Just decided to check seeing as I?ve gotta go to the hospital and pick them both up when I get a phone call.? Twilight smirked to her, ?That won?t be for a while yet though? you know what the hospitals are like.? He laughed softly before sitting up and taking his arms from around his girlfriend, he then yawned slightly, ?I?m still a little tired though. Never got much sleep last night though. Had to go on a wild goose chase to be quite honest with the accidents and all.? He closed his eyes slightly before opening them again and looking at Nura, ?You got the time?? He looked around and saw no clock anywhere.
?Hmm, just let me check.? Nura stood up and walked into the kitchen where her parents stored a kitchen timer, ?Well according to this it?s 1:10pm.? She double checked, ?Yeah, it?s only that time.? She looked back at Twilight from the other room.
?Well I only dropped them off about 12:30pm so they?ve only been gone 40 minutes which makes me only been gone for that amount of time too.? Twilight looked over at her. He stared at her non stop for a few moments before shaking his head and sighing happily. Never in his life had he seen such a pretty lioness. He relaxed back down on the sofa again and continued to smile over to her.
Nura smirked as she noticed that Twilight was deep in thought. She laughed a little before standing in the doorway looking at him, ?I?m gonna go and have a shower. I?ll be about 10-15 minutes.? She smiled to him as she grabbed hold of her towel and walked upstairs leaving Twilight alone in the room.
Twilight looked around at his surroundings and grimaced as he looked up at the ceiling which appeared to be stained. Paint was flaking off and the plaster was all cracked. He knew Nura deserved better than this but since this was all her parents could afford, he knew she had to make do; at least until she left home anyway. He sighed and dipped his head for a second ? his thoughts were deep about Nura at this moment and he smiled at some of the happy thoughts that came to mind.
Yay Twi and Nura :cheese: can you feel the love :p.
Awesome parts KS keep it up t'is freeking awesome :lol: ^^.
Thanks a lot, LKS. ^^ :hugs:
Here's some more of the story completed. Whoa, I've done about 5 new parts today in total. O_o
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Time seemed to pass so slowly at this point and Twilight looked around at his surroundings once more. He heard movement upstairs and sat up a little more. He decided to go upstairs and check out what it was, ?Nura, is everything alright up there?? He slowly climbed the stairs one by one. He didn?t really feel very safe on these stairs since they didn?t feel very stable to him. When he reached the top of the stairs, he awaited an answer from Nura.
A few moments later, Nura finally answered Twilight, ?Yeah, I?m fine. Just coming out of the shower now.?
Twilight smirked as he stood at the bathroom door, ?Good to hear. Just hurry up out there will ya? Cheers love.? He sat down on the stairs outside near the doorway.
?Come in if you want. I?m pretty much dressed.? Nura called from the bathroom. Her voice was slightly muffled to Twilight but she was loud enough for him to understand her.
?Um, are you sure?? Twilight asked as he stood right in front of the door.
?Sure, you can come in if you want.? She opened the door slightly and looked at Twilight. A slight smile came to her face, ?Come on in.?
?Hehe, alright then.? Twilight?s cheeks blushed slightly. However, he did give her a slight smile back before stepping into the bathroom.
Nura put both of her arms around Twilight?s shoulders and pinned him down onto the floor, ?Now, where were we?? She giggled to him slightly as he lay on the floor underneath her.
:gasp: Nura tricked Twilight into the bathroom!! Hehe. :D Clever lioness. :browlift:
Sly Nura...........:p very nice KS ;)
Thanks for the comments people. ^^ Yesh, Nura is a sneaky lioness. :p LKS wanted me to write some more before he went to college so here it is. ;)
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Twilight looked up at her before smirking slightly up to her, ?I don?t know but I do remember that I wanted to kiss you.? He remained to stay firmly pinned underneath her weight.
?You want something from me huh?? Nura smirked down to Twilight as she kept both of her arms around his shoulders, ?You want a lot from me don?t you, Twi?? She giggled down to him before looking up to see if the bathroom window was shut. She then turned and looked back down to him, ?Aww, you?re so sweet.? She blushed slightly as she kissed Twilight on the cheek a couple of times before moving towards his muzzle.
?Hehe, you want to kiss me now then huh?? Twilight grinned up to her as she kissed his cheek a couple of times before moving his muzzle closer to hers.
This wasn?t Twilight or Nura?s first kiss ? however, it still felt good to them both even if they had done it already. Twilight wrapped his arms around over Nura?s furry back before moving his muzzle away from hers, ?Hehe that ? felt good. Haven?t really done that in a while.? He licked her on the muzzle softly.
great.. soo err where's my part :lol:
jk :p
Lovely KS :p
i guess i need to change the title parental guide:p
Here's some more of the story. Just decided to write a little more since I've been drawing most of the night. ^^
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?I liked it actually.? Nura smirked down to Twilight as she rubbed her paws on his shoulders once more.
Meanwhile, Twilight?s ears twitched as he heard the noise of a bleeping sound downstairs. He just ignored it for now and looked back up to Nura and laughed softly, ?I heard some bleeping just then. Imagine if we were being watched.? He looked around at their surroundings.
?I don?t think anyone will be watching us here Twi.? Nura smiled down to Twilight, ?The sound came from downstairs, it-??Before she could finish, Twilight interrupted her.
?Oh shoot. I left my mobile phone down there along with my car keys.? He slapped his paw against his forehead, ?I knew I should?ve brought it up here.? He sighed before looking up at his girlfriend, ?Nura, would you please let me up for a sec? Just gonna see who actually did call me. It couldn?t have been Kat. He hasn?t been in long enough.?
Nura nodded slightly at Twilight?s reaction and she slowly rolled off the top of him to let Twilight up. He then quickly ran out of the bathroom and down the stairs to the lounge where he had left his car keys and mobile.
He picked his phone up off the coffee table and looked at the screen to see it say ?1 missed call.? He sighed and rolled his eyes, ?Ah crap, bet it was Kat.? He scrolled down to Kat?s name and pressed the call button to call him. However, he received the message that his phone was switched off at the time.
?Stupid Kat. I told him to keep his phone on.? Twilight cursed to himself as he held his phone in his grip.
Nura entered the lounge through the doorway, ?What?s happened now?? She asked curiously sitting on the sofa beside Twilight.
Twilight turned his head slightly towards Nura as she sat down beside him, ?Kat?s called me, that?s what. Now, the silly fool has his mobile turned off.? He laughed a little before sighing once more.
?Oh?? Nura frowned and looked towards the side, ?So are you gonna go and find them or what? I?ll come with you if you want.?
?Yeah. I guess that?s the only thing I can do to be quite honest. Feel free to come with me Nura. I won?t stop my own girlfriend coming with me.? He leaned over towards her and kissed her on the cheek softly before putting his arms around her and holding her close.
Here's some more of the story which I wrote out earlier on today. Sorta just things between Twilight and Nura here. Figured I needed to bring them into the story some more, plus LKS wanted some more. ;) ^^
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Nura smiled as Twilight offered her his loving embrace, ?You know I can keep you company, Twilight.? She leaned over and whispered into his ear, ?I?ll always be there with you.?
Twilight remained to hold her close, ?I?m glad to hear that, Nura. I?ll always be with you too.? He whispered into her ear too before taking his arms from around her and sitting up, ?I think we?d better be off now just in case it was Kat.? He stood up and looked at Nura.
Nura nodded to Twilight?s response and stood up herself, ?I?d better take the house keys then in that case. My parents probably won?t be back anyway.? She picked up the house keys from the nearby cabinet before smiling to Twilight as she stood by the front door.
Twilight smirked over to her, ?What do your parents know? Do they even know you?re even going out with me?? He laughed a little before heading towards the front door to where she was standing.
Nura smirked back at him, ?To be honest, no. They?d be pretty furious if they found out I was going out with someone anyway so that?s why I haven?t told them.? She sighed slightly as she continued to hold the house keys in her grip.
?Meh, don?t worry about them anyway. Just think about you and me for now.? Twilight smiled to her before walking past Nura and out the front door. He waited patiently for Nura to lock the door behind them.
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To avoid triple posting, I just decided to edit this reply. :p
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Nura stepped out of the front door and slammed it shut. This was due to the reason that the door was an old, council door and needed various repairs, ?We haven?t bought the house yet so we can?t get a decent door fitted.? Nura sighed as she looked at Twilight, ?I wish my parents could afford more.? She shook her head slightly as she slipped the keys down into her pocket and followed Twilight down the garden path to his car.
Twilight pressed one of the buttons on his set of keys to automatically unlock the doors. He looked over at Nura who was just about to shut the gate behind her. He remained to stay stood on the road just outside the vehicle. Nura smiled slightly to Twilight as she approached the passenger side door. She opened it and climbed in before closing it behind her and making sure her seatbelt was fastened and secure.
Twilight remained to stay stood outside for a few moments. He sighed and leaned against the vehicle slightly; the moon and star transfers slightly glowing as his dark red shirt covered them slightly. He looked up to the sky before sighing once more and opening the door to climb into the drivers? side. It was pretty obvious he was deep in thought; he wasn?t exactly sure what though. It was just something that struck his mind at that particular time. He quickly climbed in and shut the door after him. He quickly turned the key in the ignition before putting his foot on the accelerator and setting off down the road. He didn?t say anything to Nura at this time though and just kept focused on his driving.
He continued to follow the signs for the hospital but didn?t say much to Nura at this time. However, he did ask her if she wanted some of his chewing gum which he had in his pocket just after he pulled up at some traffic lights, ?Want any gum?? he asked her politely.
?Um, sure.? Nura smiled and approved Twilight?s offer. She carefully took the sachet of gum out of Twilight?s paw as he held it out to her, ?Thanks.? She winked to him as she put it in her mouth.
Twilight smiled at her reaction, ?No problem.? He made sure he stored the rest in his pocket just in case she wanted any later. As soon as the traffic lights changed to green, he soon set off again to leave the cars which were behind him, behind.
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Now, comments people. Comments. ^^
Nura is a bad daughter xD :p not telling her parents.........
good job KS ;)
:lol: Maybe cos' her parents are just tight and don't want her to have a boyfriend.
Anyways, here's some more of the story.
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He reduced his speed just after he saw the speed limit cameras ?Don?t wanna get caught by those.? He immediately put his foot on the brakes and his speed decreased. He was now travelling at 30Mph, the correct speed limit for built up areas.
Nura remained to stay quiet and just let Twilight continue concentrating on his driving. She slowly chewed the spearmint flavoured gum and continued to look out the passenger side window at the scenery of the urban areas of Manchester.
Meanwhile, an old Volvo Estate cut out in front of Twilight which caused him to break really hard causing Nura and of course himself to jolt forward, ?Sorry Nura.? Twilight looked at Nura, ?It was him in front that cut me up. Had to break too soon.?
?It?s alright.? Nura gave Twilight a slight smile before getting into the position she previously was in.
Twilight looked towards her once more before looking out onto the road ahead again. The Volvo was travelling slower than usual which made Twilight tail-gate it. He sighed and rolled his eyes, ?Can you go any slower??
The hospital was now visible in the distance. Twilight switched his indicators on and decided to over-take the Volvo, ?I?ve had enough of you.? He cursed to himself as he pulled back into the left hand lane. He increased his speed to a little faster than usual but was aware of the speed cameras nearby.
He indicated to say he was pulling into the hospital and turned in, ?Can?t afford to have any hold-ups after all.? He smirked to Nura as he pulled up in the pick-up bays in front of the hospital. These were used for Taxi?s as Taxi ranks but Twilight didn?t care. He stepped out of the car and looked around for Katai and Asha. Still, he saw them nowhere in sight.
He sighed and sat back in the drivers? seat again, ?Nura, would you like to stop over at my house tonight?? He smiled to her politely, ?I?m pretty sure you?d enjoy it more than staying over at your house.? He winked to her.
?I?d like to but I don?t know what my parent?s would think.? Nura sighed, ?But I?d love to come.? She smiled to him as she raised her head slightly.
Here's some more of the story. Good thing I've got into the writing mood again. This sort of went dead for a while. :lol:
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?Just sort of figured you?d like to come and spend the night. Then tomorrow, you could stay at my house to get ready and all.? Twilight?s face lit up with a larger smile than before.
Nura looked to the side and thought for a moment before looking back towards Twilight and smiled at him, ?I?d love that.? She held his paw slightly as she looked into his dark blue eyes which were as dark as the night itself. She slightly leaned forward, Twilight did this too but they were both interrupted by Katai who stood outside the vehicle on the drivers? side. They both quickly turned around.
?And what?s going off here?? He smirked to both of them who looked slightly startled, ?Sharing a bit of love huh?? He laughed softly.
?Uh, why? yes actually.? Twilight said still slightly startled at the sight of Katai, ?I just came from Nura?s house to come and pick you up. I tried to ring you but you had turned your phone off.?
?Yeah well I needed to keep it off inside the hospital. I just sort of called you to say that me and Asha were nearly ready to be picked up but you never answered your phone at that time.? Katai replied to Twilight?s response, ?Anyway Twi, forget about this for now.? He smiled to him as he accessed the vehicle and climbed into the right hand side whilst Asha climbed into the left hand side.
Twilight closed his door before turning the key in the ignition, ?Yeah well sorry about that, Kat. Me and Nura were kinda doing stuff in the backyard. I was sorta helping her out with? the gardening.? Twilight blushed slightly as he waited at the junction to turn out onto the main road. It was petty much obvious he was lying in some sort of way but he tried his best not to show it.
?Ah right.? Katai nodded his head slightly not noticing Twilight blushing, ?Either way, can you head back towards the car sales place? I received a call on my mobile whilst I was waiting. It?s ready for collection now.?
Twilight switched his indicators on as he made a U-turn in the road, ?Yeah, sure. Man that was fast wasn?t it? You only sent your car in this morning.? Twilight laughed slightly as he continued to focus on his driving.
?Aye, I know.? Katai smirked at Twilight?s response, ?But don?t forget, those guys at that place are professionals. Guess I wouldn?t need to be chauffeured around by you anymore, Twi.? He laughed a little as he looked out the window once more, ?Guess me and Asha can travel to the party ?in style??? He smirked as he looked across at Asha.
?Yeah well no more petrol wasting either. Did you notice the gas prices are going up and up? They?re not getting any lower, Kat. I went to fill up the other day and the price a litre as risen to nearly ?1. Best put in more hours in at work in that case.? Twilight sighed slightly as he told Katai after listening to his response.
?Heh, yeah. I kinda noticed when I drove past there before I had my accident.? Katai frowned a little as the thought of the previous accident came to mind yet again, ?Anyway, on the topic of jobs and stuff, what do you work as now then Twi? Last time I heard you worked in a supermarket.?
Twilight tried his best to stay focused on his driving whilst answering and responding to Katai?s questions, ?Yeah well I sorta figured I needed to move on from the supermarket stuff and decided to get a job on an industrial estate outside the city. I work in some of the offices there. Guess it?s a pretty well paid job but obviously not as well paid as yours.?
?Well my job requires some serious work, Twi. It?s not all that easy, I can assure you.? Katai winked to Twilight, ?I have to attend various meetings and stuff at different places around the country. Last meeting I had to attend was in London, one was right down in Dorset. I have to travel around a hell of a lot. Then again, your family comes from Dorset so I guess you know what it?s like there.?
Triple post but hey, no comments. Here's some more of the story. Just managed to get some done after working on a pic related to the story. :bleen:
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?Yeah, well I used to live down in Gillingham before moving up here. Figured I could get a better job and stuff.? Twilight looked back at Katai slightly before changing the subject, ?So where ya wanna be? The car sales place right??
Katai nodded slightly at Twilight?s response, ?Yeah? there always seems to be better work in a city like this.? He then answered Twilight?s question, ?Yeah, yeah. Just turn here and go straight down the road until you see a sign saying ?Prideland Car Sales.? He motioned his paw to tell Twilight to turn left.
Twilight took notice to Katai?s directions and took a left turn which headed into an industrial area. There were several car sales places here as well as a few factories and office places. Twilight did recognise this place so he did know where he was heading.
Within a few more yards down the road, the sign became visible and Twilight pulled across the other lane and pulled in outside the car sales place which was obviously on the right hand side, ?There ya go, Kat. If you need me for anything else, I?ll see what I can do.? Twilight smiled at him politely as Katai and Asha both exited the vehicle.
?Thanks, Twi. If you ever want anything from me, I?ll be there.? He gave Twilight a pat on the shoulder before closing the door and stepping up on the curb.
Twilight gave him another smirk before putting his foot down on the accelerator and increased his speed as he travelled down the road, ?So, you wanna head back to my house now then?? He politely offered Nura as he turned his head slightly smiling at her.
Nura smiled to him from the passenger side, ?I?d love to. Maybe we?ll actually have some privacy whilst we?re there.? She smirked, ?No prying eyes, no nothing.? She giggled a little.
?Yeah, that?s right. Besides, I have my own house so I don?t live with my parents anymore. I sorta left just after I qualified for a good job, that?s how I bought my baby.? He referred to his car, ?I love the little transfers. Sorta adds a bit of Twilight-ness to it.? He laughed softly as he continued to focus on his driving.
Nura looked away a little with a shy expression on her face before looking back towards her boyfriend, ?So where abouts do you live?? She asked him curiously, her cheeks still blushing a faint pink.
?You mean now? um, somewhere a little further away to where you live. You?ll see when we get there.? He took one of his paws off the steering wheel and stroked Nura?s knee slightly before smiling at her lovingly.
yay for Nura mrawr :p :cheese: keep em coming KS t'is awesome ^^
great job KS ;)
Thanks guys. :hugs: And yesh LKS, yay for Nura. :p :lol:
And here's a bit more of the story...
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Nura nodded and smiled at Twilight?s response before closing her eyes slightly and laying back in the soft, passenger seat. Twilight slowly took his paw off her knee and put it back on the steering wheel again. Within a few more minutes, a new housing estate was visible on both sides.
Nura opened her eyes again and looked around, ?Wow, these houses look new.? She smiled at the sight of them before thinking about her own. She then sighed, ?I wish I lived in a house like these.?
?Well Nura, you know? um, if things work out and stuff? you could move in with me sometime.? Twilight politely offered, ?After all, my house does have 4 bedrooms. I don?t really need a house that big to be quite honest.? He laughed softly before pulling up in front of a fairly large and new house.
This house had a double garage and a fairly large front garden. Twilight had his house the way he wanted it and luckily, he got on with all of his neighbours. He got to know some young, adolescents which lived next door to him and occasionally went to play football with them on one of the nearby fields.
Nura smiled at the sight of his house, ?Wow, I bet you?ve got all that house all comfortable inside.? She grinned.
?Yeah, comfortable for me and you.? He smiled to her lovingly before opening the door and climbing out. He stepped up on the curb and waited for Nura to make her appearance.
Just finished another part of the story. This is actually my 45th page so far on the story altogether. O_o
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Nura opened the passenger side door after waiting for a car to travel past. She stepped out of the vehicle and closed the door after her before stepping up on the curb and standing by Twilight.
Twilight pressed down on one of the buttons on the set of keys to lock the doors automatically before looking and smirking at Nura, ?Let?s get inside anyways, looks like we?re gonna have a storm.? He looked up to the sky all of a sudden as it went rather dark. The sky was grey and the wind began to pick up.
Nura also looked up to the sky, ?Yeah, you?re right.? She looked at Twilight before heading towards the gate as she felt a drop of rain slide down her cheeks. She knew she couldn?t get in the house without Twilight but luckily for her, there was a horning over the doorway. She sheltered underneath that for now as the rain began to get heavier.
Twilight quickly closed the gate behind him as he began to speed up to get out of the rain and under the shelter. The rain was so heavy which caused the visibility to get poorer and poorer. Within a few more seconds, he reached the front door porch way, ?I was right.? Twilight laughed a little as he watched a drop of water drip from his quiff on his mane. He quickly put his paw in his pocket and took out a small key made out of copper. He inserted it into the lock on the PVC door and turned it clock-wise. He pushed down on the handle slightly and opened the door. He stepped back a little to let Nura in first, ?As always, the female gets to go in first.? He smirked to her as he continued to hold the house keys firmly in his grip.
?Aww, seriously Twi, I can?t get over how sweet you are.? She walked past him before tickling him on his muzzle with her tail tuft. As she entered the house, she felt the warmth of the central heating system hit her. She then turned towards Twilight before doing any further actions.
Twilight scrunched his nose up slightly as Nura tickled him with her tail tuft, ?Haha, Nura...? He laughed slightly before closing the door after them and taking his hoodie off which he always hung on a coat hanger which was situated in a small room beside the door. He then decided to switch the light on in the hallway, ?Feeling all warm now?? He smiled to her, ?Make yourself comfortable in the lounge. I?ll bring you a drink and then if you want, we can watch some TV together.?
Nura smiled at Twilight?s offer, ?That?ll be great. Do you have any bottles of lager? I?d like one of those if possible.?
Twilight smirked and laughed at Nura?s question, ?Why, of course I do love. A football match is too empty without a bottle of Skol.? He winked to her, ?And wait, you?re not 18 yet but who really gives a damn about the laws.? He sighed slightly and rolled his eyes, ?Sure, I?ll get one of those for ya.?
tut tut KS, promoting underage drinking :p