Well, you'll all see later. I've already started writing the next part. However, I'll have to finish the rest later on after school. :grrr:
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Well, you'll all see later. I've already started writing the next part. However, I'll have to finish the rest later on after school. :grrr:
I shall look forward to it KS!
Here's the next part all finished... =)
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After taking the turning towards the motorway, Katai switched his indicators on. He took the slip road to enter the motorway and pulled out into the inside lane before switching to the outside lane. Twilight did the same and was there to make sure nothing major went wrong on their journey home. He headed straight towards Bury to drop Asha back off at her house.
After travelling along the motorway for a good 10 minutes or so, Katai switched to the inside lane. He travelled at a slower speed obviously due to the damage done to his vehicle. He saw the exit coming up and switched his indicators on. He took the slip road off the motorway and carried on down the road. Twilight was still following.
The time was now 12:10am and their journey home had obviously been delayed because of the earlier accident. Katai was concerned for Asha and wanted to get her home as soon as possible so that she could rest. He also wanted to get home himself so that he could relax too. They began to approach Bury and Katai kept a close eye out for ?Rosebank Drive?. The headlights from his car shone on the street sign and Katai quickly turned the indicators on, turning into Asha?s street. He looked across at Asha who was still resting her eyes. He pulled up outside her house and gave her a quick and gentle nudge, ?You?re home love.?
Asha slowly opened her eyes and looked around, ?Are we? Already?? she looked across to Katai, ?So, I am home?? She smiled a little and gripped Katai?s paw tightly, ??but please Katai, take care of yourself on the way home. I don?t want to lose you because I love you?? she wrapped her harms around his neck and leaned over to Katai who was still sat in the driver?s seat. She kissed him a couple of times before taking her harms from around his neck, ??I?ll be there to pick you up tomorrow. I promise?? she grabbed hold of her handbag and exited the vehicle.
Katai looked up to her, ?Don?t worry Asha?I?ll be fine. Twilight will be guiding me all the way back home anyway. You just get some rest?? he smiled to her sweetly.
?Don?t worry Katai, I will.? She smiled back and closed the door before taking the house keys from out of her handbag.
Katai remained stationary outside her house for a minute until she closed the door behind her. He made sure she was safe. He then looked into his mirrors at Twilight behind and put his hand up to let him know that he was continuing on with his journey. He switched his indicators on and Twilight nodded. Katai pulled out into the road again as well as Twilight and they both continued their journey back to Katai?s house.
nice part KS
but i fear the worst is yet to come
awesome part KS ^^ :cheese: Twilight is not injured for once mwahaa :lol:
awesome job KS ;)
Thanks. :cheese: Here's some more that I've just written...
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Katai continued to keep an eye on Twilight behind by looking through his mirrors. After travelling down a long stretch of road for about 30 minutes or so, Katai could see the gates to his house. They had both taken a different route instead of going via the motorway. He pulled up outside his gates and grabbed hold of the remote control so that the electric gates could be opened. Twilight waited patiently behind and waited for Katai to actually park up. Katai drove into the driveway, further on towards the garage and parked up outside. He switched the engine off and climbed out of the vehicle. He waved his paw in the air to tell Twilight that it was alright to leave. Twilight nodded and put his car into reverse before driving out of the long driveway.
Katai was now alone. Everything was so quiet except from the noise of the wind howling. Katai didn?t like to be alone too much, especially if it was nigh time and no-one else was around. He quickly took the house keys from out of his jacket pocket and inserted the key into the door. All of a sudden, he heard noises from inside the bushes and trees around him, ?Who?s there?? he turned round quickly and began to look around. There was no answer.
Katai was beginning to get a nasty headache himself. He started to rub his forehead with his paw. He then heard the noise again, ??show yourself!? he called out continuing to look around. At this moment in time, Katai didn?t even dare to turn around just in case he got attacked. He began to tremble in fear as the noises began to get louder and more frequent. He heard his name being called out in the bushes nearby. The noise was only faint but it was loud enough for Katai to hear.
After rubbing his head a little more until the pain subsided again, Katai walked down the steps from his door and slowly walked towards where the noises were coming from. He felt something touch him from behind but didn?t quite make out who or what it was. After a few seconds, Katai couldn?t hear or see a thing. He had been beaten and assaulted. He was left unconscious.
About a couple of hours later, Katai slowly opened his eyes and began to rub his forehead once again. He looked around and saw nothing, just the patio lights, his garage, the trees, plants and his damaged car. He stood up and ran quickly over to his front door. He opened it as fast as he could and locked it securely after he had entered the hallway. He was worn out and decided to fall asleep on the couch in the living room. He had no idea what had happened before, it all remained a mystery to Katai for now.
:gasp: Oh no! Poor Katai! :badnews: :tears:
That's all he needs on top of the earlier events. :worried:
I know, I'm like 'cut the guy a break!' Lol.
:tears:
Katai has a stalker...:p great job KS ;)
Sorry for the lack of updates on the story. Anyways, I finally got round to writing some more. Can't say it's much but enjoy...=)
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Time passed so slowly that night but Katai thankfully had a good nights sleep despite the events that had happened the night before. Katai?s eyes slowly opened. He looked around curiously and saw the sunlight filtering through the blinds and curtains. He decided to actually get up and actually change his clothes which had been stained by blood. He headed upstairs to his bedroom.
After entering his bedroom, Katai looked deeply at himself in the mirror. The cuts and bruises were now easily visible but the pain was subsiding a bit. He then opened his wardrobe and took a clean T-shirt out as well as a clean pair of jeans. Katai took his Man U shirt off which had been stained by blood. He then took his blood stained jeans off before pulling the clean T-shirt over his head, putting his harms through. He then sat down on his bed and pulled his jeans up so they reached the top of his legs around his waist He then headed off towards the bathroom for a quick wash. After that, he walked down the long staircase and entered the modern kitchen. He opened the fridge to get something quick to eat for breakfast since he couldn?t be bothered to cook anything. He grabbed hold of some scotch eggs which he had recently bought and began to eat them one by one. After he had finished and had enough to eat, he exited the kitchen and picked his mobile phone up from the counter. He scrolled down to Twilight?s phone number and rang him up just as he was about to exit the house. He locked the door behind him and waited patiently for his friend to answer.
After another 10 seconds or so, there was finally an answer. It was Twilight, ?Hello? Twilight? is that you? Oh right, well listen, I?m just about to take my car to the dealers to get fixed. I was just ringing to ask if you?d like to come and pick me up and take me round to Asha?s house afterwards.? After receiving a positive answer from Twilight Katai smiled, ?Thanks mate. Be there in about 20 minutes ok? I?ll have to sort a few things out before though. See ya later.? He hung up and took the car keys out from his pocket and opened the doors. Since it was daytime and it was light, Katai could see the damage in more detail, ??this is gonna cost more than I thought it would.? Katai?s ears drooped a little. He opened the driver?s side door carefully and climbed in. He then inserted the key into the ignition before putting his car into reverse and driving out of his long driveway.
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EDIT: Spelling mistake. :woeisme:
making Twilight a taxi service now :lol:
good part there KS...darn wanna read more xD
great job KS ;)
Great part KS - erm.....I hope you don't mind me mentioning this but there is a little typo in there. Instead of arms you put harms.
I'm confused about what happened to Katai the night before. He was attacked? Why hasn't he been robbed or anything? I would have presumed that the attackers would have taken his keys and robbed the house. Or taken the car or whatever. Or was he not attacked and it was in his mind? I'm confused. Lol.
First off, forgive the typos. I have a bad habit of spelling those words wrong.
Secondly, the attackers supposed to have left the scene on the night Katai was attacked although he did get knocked unconscious; it could also be in his mind like some sort of a dream or something.
Sorry to confuse you. :cringe:
Its ok - I just thought that they wouldn't have just beaten him up when there is a swanky house behind him, Lol. But never mind me! I will stop spoiling the story. :D
Twilight Taxis :D
Make that a swanky mansion worth half a million pounds. :cheese:Quote:
Originally posted by Lucy Lioness
Its ok - I just thought that they wouldn't have just beaten him up when there is a swanky house behind him, Lol. But never mind me! I will stop spoiling the story. :D
Twilight Taxis :D
Twilight is the new taxi service it seems. :evilgrin:
Mmm...the smexiest cab driver in all of town. :DQuote:
Originally posted by King Simba
Make that a swanky mansion worth half a million pounds. :cheese:
Twilight is the new taxi service it seems. :evilgrin:
Lucy, if someone gets assaulted, and there is no robery, it is usually personal. Whomever it was, they wanted Katai. His biggest mistakes were to not call the police, and to not check on Asha. The attack on Katai may have simply been used to get him out of the way. However, the hole attack and subsequent passing out could have been a delusion from the earlier accident. It is extremely possible that Katai is unknowingly suffering from a concussion, which can cause halucinations and blackouts.
I would also have to say that Twighling has prooven to be Katai's guardian angel.
Well, since yesterday the things I've been doing the most is drawing pics relating to the story and nothing else. :idiot: I know 3 pics are the same but anyway...
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7...ianthro9dn.jpg
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7...thro2bw5ra.jpg
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7...anthro24ja.jpg
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7...aanthro8rn.jpg
very nice KS ;)
Thanks. :)
I'm gonna have to start getting cracking with this story again. Good thing I have a day off tomorrow.
:idiot:
look forward to reading it KS!
keep up the good work
Me too!!! :D But we need good news, Hehe. :DQuote:
Originally posted by IchLiebeNALA
look forward to reading it KS!
keep up the good work
good news...Twilight stuff no doubt then :lol: j/k
can't wait any longer :p
All Hail King Simba
Hmm, well, you'll have to. It's a little too early to be writing stuff now. :lol: :pQuote:
Originally posted by Lion King Stu
good news...Twilight stuff no doubt then :lol: j/k
can't wait any longer :p
Sorry about the double post but anyway, here's something I completed the other day relating to the FNO story. Link is only active for 7 days.
Buck Rogers - Friday Night Out.
very good indeed KS, but i can seem to hear any music...
ah well. good idea nonetheless
Hmm, well, it's done the exact same thing with a few others too and that was with different videos. Maybe try playing it again later? :hmm:
Anyways, thanks for the comment. =)
okees. will do KS!
Well finally I got round to writing a little more of the story. Sorry, it's not much but it's better than nothing at all.
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Katai thought deep to himself at this very moment and decided to go and call round at Asha?s house to see if she was in good shape especially after the night before. After driving along the country roads for some time instead of the motorway, Bury finally approached and Katai decreased his speed. He turned his indicators on yet again after approaching Rosebank Drive. He took a left turn and turned into the street before driving along at a steady pace. He pulled up outside Asha?s house and got out of the drivers side, still taking care of opening and closing the doors due to the previous accident. He began to rub his head again and could tell the cuts had scabbed over. After the pain subsided, he walked down Asha?s drive before knocking on her door hoping that she was awake and hoping that he wouldn?t disturb her.
?Who?s there?? Asha?s voice could be heard in the hallway.
?Asha, it?s me.? Katai answered back and waited patiently for Asha to open the door.
After a few more moments, Asha opened the door and smiled at the sight of Katai. Her injuries looked as though they had dried out and scabbed over too so it was less painful for the both of them, however, they still knew best, ?You?re off to the garage to get your car repaired aren?t you?? Asha asked curiously, ?Would you like me to follow and give you a lift back??
?No, no, no? I?ve arranged for Twilight to give me a lift back here. After that, we can both go to the hospital. It?s best we get these injuries checked over.? Katai sighed before looking back up to Asha, ?Are you feeling alright now? That?s what I?m worried about?your safety and of course you? Asha.?
Asha blinked a couple of times, ?Don?t worry about me Katai? I?m feeling alright now. A good night?s sleep did it good but I do agree? it?s best we get checked over at the hospital anyway.?
Yay!!!! Great part KS - its all good! :browlift:
another good part KS
keep it up ;)
Awww even in pain he looks after her.
very nice KS ;)
Here's some more of the story. Again, I'm sorry for the lack of story updates but anyway...
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After a few moments of saying nothing, Katai reciprocated, ?I?ll come back to your house straight after. I?m sure you wouldn?t mind driving us there? if you don?t want to, that?s alright.?
?No, no? I?ll be able to drive us there and back. Don?t worry?? Asha kissed him on the cheek, ??just take care of yourself on the way there? don?t get hurt.?
Katai smiled to Asha and hugged her lovingly, ?Don?t worry love, I?ll be alright.? He then took his arms from around her waist and smiled to her once again before stepping down from the doorstep.
Asha smiled back as Katai began to walk down the drive back to where his car was, ?I?ll take this to get repaired now I think.? Katai smirked before climbing into the drivers? seat and closing the door behind him.
After setting the car up ready to continue on with his journey, Katai pulled out into the road and tooted his horn as he left to say goodbye to Asha. He drove off down the road.
Asha sighed to herself and continued to stand at the door for a few moments after Katai had left. She looked down at her fingers and thought deeply to herself. The only jewellery she wore on her fingers was a plain signet ring. She closed her eyes for a few moments and Katai was all that was on her mind at this time. After that, she closed the door behind her as she entered her house again.
Meanwhile, all that was on Katai?s mind at this very moment was Asha. He couldn?t stop thinking about her although he knew he had to focus on his driving. He continued his journey to the car dealer and followed the signposts towards the Manchester area.
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Enjoy even though it isn't much. ;)
Yay! More story!! It's still great! It's so sweet how much they love each other! :love:
can you feel the love tonight ^^ :cheese: :lol: