:alone: Oh no!!! Poor Katai and Asha!!!!!!!!!! :tears: I hope they will be okay. :emo:
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:alone: Oh no!!! Poor Katai and Asha!!!!!!!!!! :tears: I hope they will be okay. :emo:
When ever theres trouble don't phone 999 phone Twilight :cheese: :lol:
Call today :D
Great Prt KS some real drama I see coming along here ^^
great job KS ;) the couples seem to be movin along pretty fast :gasp: jus playin
Here's some more of the story. Twilight to the rescue. :idiot: :lol:
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Meanwhile, Twilight turned onto the M60 motorway and drove along as fast as he could to be there for Katai and Asha. He knew what kind of difficulty they were in due to hearing the state of Katai?s voice, ?His breathing was so heavy?? Twilight said to himself putting his foot on the accelerator a little more and increasing his speed. Since there wasn?t much traffic on the roads that night, it was easy for Twilight to get to the injured couple faster. After about 10 minutes or so, Twilight took the turning off at junction 10. He decreased his speed as he approached the roundabout. He immediately stopped at the sight of the collision. He pulled up close to the two wrecked cars and Kingy was no longer in sight. He turned his engine off and looked across to the wrecked Rover before looking over to Katai?s wrecked Mercedes. He quickly climbed out of his car and ran over to the wrecked Mercedes. He looked down through the window and saw Katai trapped in between his seat and the steering wheel. He looked across to see Asha lay there, unconscious, ?Katai?I?m here.? Twilight slowly opened the door which had been battered and crushed.
Katai looked up to Twilight still breathing at the heavy pace he was doing about 15 minutes ago, ?Twilight?would you mind giving us?an hand?? he looked back across to Asha who was moving a little, ??looks as though Asha?s coming round??
Twilight looked down to Katai before looking across to Asha, ??sure, that?s why I came.? He held his paw out to help the couple, ?Give me your paw Katai. I?ll help you.?
Katai gave Twilight a weak smile, ?Thanks Twilight. You?re more than a good friend.? He grabbed hold of Twilight?s paw before squeezing out from between the seat and steering wheel. He got out safely although he was badly injured, especially around his head which had been badly cut and bruised.
Asha slowly opened her eyes and had woken up, ?W-what happened?? she looked around at her surroundings.
Twilight held his paw out to Asha also, ?Let me give you an hand.? He smiled a little to Asha.
Asha gave Twilight a week smile herself before gripping hold of Twilight?s paw and pulling herself out also. At the sight of her boyfriend, Asha?s face lit up in a weak smile. She rushed over to him and hugged him lovingly, ?Katai, thank goodness you?re alright.? She kissed him a couple of times herself although she had bad injuries around her head and neck area which were mainly cuts and bruises.
Katai held Asha close and rubbed his paw against her face, ?I was so worried about you. I thought I almost lost you.? He looked over to his car and noticed the damage which had been caused by the collision. He then looked across to the purple Rover. Kingy hadn?t been in sight for the last 30 minutes or so. He had left the scene.
Super Twilight...he has to fly off now to save the world from a asteroid :lol:
Good as always KS ;) :cheese:
great job KS ;)
Thanks. :cheese: Here's some more of the story. Not much though cos' I've been busy doing art homework.
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After staring over at the other wrecked car for a few seconds, Katai once again offered Asha his loving embrace. Asha did the same and looked up to Katai, ?What happened anyway??
Katai took his harms from around her waist and looked over to the two wrecked cars; He sighed and looked at Asha, ?We had a collision with the other car. I didn?t even see him coming. That was probably due to the high speed he was travelling at anyway.? He then walked over to Twilight, ?Thanks for helping my friend.? He shook his best friend?s paw.
Twilight smiled to Katai, ?No problem. That?s what friends are for?? he paused and took a closer look at Katai and Asha?s injuries, ?Are you going to get something done about those injuries? Or isn?t it that major??? his smile gradually turned into a more curious and concerned expression.
?We?ll probably head off to the hospital for a check-up tomorrow. Nothing that major at the moment though?we?re both lucky I guess.? Katai sighed and looked at his car, ??should we phone someone up to take them away??
?Your choice?you might wanna call a low loader or something before you go anywhere. I?ll call one of you want?I know a company who takes wrecked cars away.? Twilight suggested and offered to Katai.
?Go ahead.? Katai smiled a little to Twilight.
Twilight took his phone from out of his pocket and scrolled down to the company?s phone number, he pressed the call button to begin the phone call.
good mini part KS doesn't matter if its short its all good ^^ :cheese:
Sorry guys, nothing new tonight story-wise. :(
But, I drew a new pic relating to the story...;)
http://img16.echo.cx/img16/6797/kingycar3zj.jpg
I posted the pic in the 'post your art here' thread but just decided to post it here again.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! i don't like him. He made Katai crash the car. :grrr:
good pic KS!
That's ok KS. :D Great pic by the way! =D He looks so cool.
If you actually knew the highway code, you would know that at a roundabout, right of way goes to traffic from the right, so technically, Kingy had right of way, the crash was Katai's fault.Quote:
Originally posted by IchLiebeNALA
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! i don't like him. He made Katai crash the car. :grrr:
BTW, awesomeness pic KS! *saves*
So Katai is really the one we should be booing? :browlift: Lol.Quote:
Originally posted by Iestyn
If you actually knew the highway code, you would know that at a roundabout, right of way goes to traffic from the right, so technically, Kingy had right of way, the crash was Katai's fault.
BTW, awesomeness pic KS! *saves*
Yes, nobody should booo my tiger x( *hugs Kingy*
Yeah, it's that Katai who is the bad driver! Lol. ;) :p Kingy is misunderstood - he looks very cool in KS's piccy.
:cool:
sorry, i take it back then!
Actually, you guys will find out what happens in the story later on. Kingy wouldn't just run away like that and yes, it was technically Katai's fault. Kingy had right away. ;)
And no probs mate. :cheese:
Here's some more of the story.. I finally got chance to write some more... =)
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After a few seconds of the phone ringing continuously, Twilight put the phone down, ?No answer there either.? He looked at Katai and Asha.
All Katai and Asha did was look at each other, ?Well, what?s gonna happen tonight then?? Katai looked back towards Twilight.
Before Twilight could answer, some headlights began to become visible in the distance. Katai and Asha just watched still holding each other close. Twilight saw them both staring, ?What is it?? he looked towards the direction they were looking in. He also noticed the headlights in the distance.
From first sight, Katai thought it was a bus or a HGV but as it approached, he started to figure out what it was; it was a low loader, something to transport Kingy?s and Katai?s wrecked cars home. The low loader pulled up alongside the two wrecked cars. An oldish looking lion stepped out the drivers? side, Kingy stepping out the passenger side.
?Good evening.? The lion smiled at Katai, Asha and Twilight, ?May I ask who was involved in the collision??
Katai stood s few steps forward along with Asha, ?It was us. The Mercedes convertible is my car?do you know whether it?s repairable or not??
The lion walked across to Katai?s convertible and analysed it, ?Well, the axel hasn?t been damaged by the looks of things. I think all you may need is a new wing and a new door on the drivers? side.?
?So, it?s repairable? If that?s the case, then that?s great.? Katai smiled to the lion, ?Who arranged for you to come anyway??
The lion looked across to Kingy, ?This tiger stood aside here. He said he was involved in the collision too, am I right?? he asked Kingy.
?Yeah. The purple Rover?s my car?would you be able to tell me if that?s repairable too?? Kingy asked the low loader driver curiously.
?Let?s see?? he walked across to Kingy?s car and analysed his car also, ?The only thing new that would need to be fitted is a new wing and bonnet. If anything?s been damaged in and around the engine, then that would need to be repaired too.?
Kingy nodded and looked across to Katai, ?Sorry about the collision.? He stepped back a little unsure of Katai?s reactions.
?That?s alright. I realised I should?ve actually gave way at the roundabout so really, it?s my fault. I should be the one saying sorry?? Katai?s ears drooped and he turned away for a few moments before looking back at Kingy.
ah well Kingy ain't all evil at least :lol:
good part KS :cheese: well writen ^^
Indeed, it's very good! =D How close are we to the end?
Hmm, no idea on that one yet. ;) I'll keep you updated on that one. =)
Thanks for reading anyways. :cheese:
Sorry for missing so much, KS. This is some really good stuff. That accident was really somthing.
No problem mate. =) Glad you're all enjoying the story so far. :cheese:
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Kingy didn?t say anything. He just gave Katai a slight nod and then turned back to the low loader driver.
?Alright?would you like to check to see if the vehicle?s work first? We might be able to get somewhere without using the low loader?? the lion looked at both Katai and Kingy.
?I?ll check?very much doubt it though.? Katai climbed into his wrecked convertible and turned the key which was still in the ignition. Much to Katai?s surprise, the engine started the first time, ??wow, I wasn?t expecting that.?
The lion smiled, ?No need to use the low loader for your car then. Does the gears and steering still work fine? You?d better test them out first.?
Katai nodded and put the car into the reverse gear. He tested the gears out by testing each and every one of them. All seemed to work fine and the steering was just as good as it was before the accident. All that seemed to have been damaged on Katai?s vehicle was the wing on the right-hand side, which had been dinted in at the door and part of the wing itself. The damage was obviously visible, but at least Katai could drive the car home himself without having to use the low loader, ?All is fine!? he called out to the driver.
?Very good.? The lion smiled to Katai before walking over across to Kingy and the other wrecked car, ?Any chance in you doing the same??
?Oh, sure.? Kingy climbed into his vehicle and turned the key in the ignition. Since all the front of the car was dinted in and smashed to pieces, there was no way in this car working again. He kept turning the key but after 3 attempts, he gave up. ?No luck here. Didn?t think there?d be any luck anyway.?
?Right, looks as though I was wrong?? The driver walked across to the purple Rover, ??the only thing we can do now is push the car up onto the low loader so it can be transported back.?
Kingy nodded and began to push the back of the car as well as the low loader driver, Twilight decided to help too and the wrecked car was soon on the low loader ready to be transported back to Kingy?s house.
?If you need any more assistance, here?s my phone number. I?ll be happy to help out anytime.? The lion gave Katai his phone number on a piece of paper, ??have a safe journey home.? He climbed into the low loader and turned on the engine, Kingy climbed into the passenger side closing the door behind him.
?Thanks. Your help is very much appreciated!? Katai called as the low loader, which was transporting Kingy?s car back to his house set off down the country road.
Katai looked over to Twilight and Asha. He was still sat in the drivers seat with the battered door open, ?Twilight, will you be able to follow us to make sure nothing major goes wrong whilst getting back home? I don?t want anything to happen?the car?s in enough state as it is ? as am I and Asha.? He asked politely smiling a little. He then looked over to Asha, ?Asha, come on, everything will be alright now.?
Asha smiled a little, walked over to the passenger side and climbed in. The passenger side wasn?t damaged in any way so it was easier and safer for Asha to enter the vehicle.
i'm really liking the story KS. I'm waiting for the next part now!
just a question, is the whole thing gonna be released as a document or is this the whole story?
I'm posting the story in sections. This is the story up to now. =) Once it's finished, all the sections of the story will be posted in this thread. ;)Quote:
Originally posted by IchLiebeNALA
just a question, is the whole thing gonna be released as a document or is this the whole story?
aye that is some good stuff KS ^^ :cheese:
Great part KS! :D Yay - they are ok! But shouldn't Katai take Asha to the hospital as she hit her head and all?
As quoted earlier on in the story:Quote:
Originally posted by Lucy Lioness
Great part KS! :D Yay - they are ok! But shouldn't Katai take Asha to the hospital as she hit her head and all?
Tomorrow. Their injuries turned out not to be as serious. ;)Quote:
?We?ll probably head off to the hospital for a check-up tomorrow. Nothing that major at the moment though?we?re both lucky I guess.?
Yeah but these kind of injuries can be more serious than they appear. There can be internal bleeding and stuff.
Anyway, I'll stop now. :D Lol. As long as they r ok. =D
I have a question! *Waves paw*
I think you may have confused some car slang. Maybe it's different in Europe, but in America, a "low-rider" is a small, compact, sport car with devices in the wheels that make the shell look like it's bouncing. They are usually elaboratly decorated and painted. There are driven by street guys, basley for showing off and impressing girls.
Is a European "low-rider" some sort of tow-truck?
Well like I said, it didn't turn out to be as serious as they both thought it would. Katai knows... ;)Quote:
Originally posted by Lucy Lioness
Yeah but these kind of injuries can be more serious than they appear. There can be internal bleeding and stuff.
Yeah. It's a vehicle used to transport damaged vehicles from one place to another. =)Quote:
Originally posted by Roquivo
Is a European "low-rider" some sort of tow-truck?
Yay!!! It's so sweet how Katai is so concerned about Asha! :love: I have been in minor car accidents, and it is not nice. :(Quote:
Originally posted by King Simba
Well like I said, it didn't turn out to be as serious as they both thought it would. Katai knows... ;)
OFF TOPIC: Well I must consider myself as lucky then. I haven't been involved in any car accidents up to now. My dad was involved in a real bad one once which caused the car which he crashed to be written off and took to the scrapyard. Apparently, it was caused by drink driving so due to this, my dad had his license took off of him for about a year or so.
ON TOPIC: Well, Katai is obviously a loving and caring lion. :cheese: Btw, seeing as Katai did hit his head on the steering wheel, he obviously has minor head injuries too.
The incident I was involved in wasn't serious. My parents, my brothers and I were in the car on a country road and we sort of just went off the road into a small ditch and a hedge, The car was a write off. But luckily no one was hurt, except my brother who hit his face, his cheek blew up like a balloon, we had to go to casualty and everything. And we were on holiday at the time, in Cumbria. So we had to rent a car for the rest of the holiday. I was scared of going in the car for some time afterwards.
:(
Well, seeing as we're on the topic of car accidents I'll tell you about another one which my dad was involved in a year last April.
My dad was just driving along a road in his home village. Apparently, this car which was also involved in the accident shot out at a junction at around 50MPH whilst my dad was driving by. The good thing is - it hit on the passenger side and the axel was damaged (the strongest part of the car). However, if the other car crashed into the doors or somewhere along the lines of around that area - chances are, my dad would've been seriously injured, even worse, killed. The car was a write off so we had to hire a car until we bought another one.
I do have some pictures but I don't really want to show them out here seeing as I don't feel it's appropriate.
:(
Here's some more of the story, it isn't much though but anyway...
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Twilight nodded to Katai, ?Sure thing mate.? He smiled politely; ?I?ll be right behind you?? he walked across to his car which was parked at the side of the roundabout and climbed in, closing the door behind him. He waited patiently for Katai to drive ahead.
Meanwhile, Katai closed the damaged door and turned his indicators on which were still working. The engine was already on so there was no need for Katai to turn to key in the ignition. He put his foot on the accelerator and drove off down the country road travelling at a slower speed than usual obviously due to the earlier collision. Twilight slowly followed behind and kept his distance. Both vehicles were travelling at a steady speed of 40MPH.
Asha looked across at Katai who had pretty serious head injuries like she had. She could tell that he was focusing hard on the road and was trying to avoid having another accident. She hesitated to speak at first, ??Katai, will you??
Katai didn?t look at her as he replied, ?Will I do what?? he asked waiting for her to finish asking her question.
Asha sighed and looked across at Katai, ??well, would you be able to drop me off back at my house??
Katai continued to keep his eyes focused on the road ahead, ??but Asha, it?s late and we both have to head off to the hospital tomorrow. It?s best we got checked over??
?I know but wouldn?t you be able to come for me in the morning? Or aren?t you able to since what happened tonight?? Asha?s ears drooped at the thought of the accident.
?Well, I?ll also be taking the car in to get repaired tomorrow. If you want, you can come round to pick me up. We?ll both go to the hospital together after I?ve taken the car in to get repaired?what do you say?? Katai suggested.
?Well, sure then.? Asha smiled to Katai and leaned back in the seat. She began to suffer with a nasty headache from the earlier accident so she started to rest her eyes and relax whilst Katai kept focus on the road ahead.
Katai looked into his mirrors and saw Twilight still following behind. He trusted his friend and wanted to do something to thank him for all the help that he offered both him and Asha but he just couldn?t think of anything right at that moment. He gave a weak smile and approached another roundabout. He decreased his speed and looked in both directions for on-coming traffic. He didn?t want another repeat of what happened at the last roundabout and always tried to avoid having accidents. He carried on and drove straight ahead towards the motorway. Twilight was still following behind.
kool part KS ;) :cheese: keep em coming ^^
Somthing is up with Asha. I think her head is hurt worse then she let on.
very good KS ;) :D can't wait to read more!
hehe, good part KS
@Roquivo:
i think your right, but she doesn't want to worry Katai.