Poems

To Azerane: The one called "Afraid of the Dark"..:cheese:

I like that poem KTL...the next to last stanza seems kinda short, though, as it has two lines instead of three.

One I'm working on:

With every beat of my heart
It feels as if my soul is ripping apart
I am fighting an enemy I can't even see
hidden deep within-inside of me
My mind keeps me company
But it's my mind that keeps me from sleeping comfortably
the fight gets harder everyday
Looking back makes you miss what it's like at age 8
My friend is now laying dead on the pavement
Life can be like hell or heaven in a second
The memories are coming back and haunting me
Causing me to see visions of being killed violently
Silently I fight the demons taking over
Sometimes I can't see living to be that much older
I'm coming from hell and the gutter
And so is my friend who's brother was killed by his other brother
I guess God remains an undercover
As bullets ring out and take yet another brother
The world remains cold and gives you cold shoulders
You're always alone in this world of lone soldiers
Lord are you there to hear all of my prayers
Or am I looking up to the sky just to see the stars' glares
Somedays I wish I could shed a few tears
but my heart's hardend from the violence that I've seen over the years

You have some amazing rhymes Roog... I envy you :p

And now I know the poem you mean... well... if I had 3 verses before then it hasn't progressed at all... hehe. But I'll try to work on it for ya ;)

Here's an older one I don't think I posted...
18/9/05 Seasons (or some such similar title)

Fiery abandon drifts ever downwards
Veins void of lifeblood cracked and dried
Now lonely limbs reach out in vain
Aspiring to grasp fire for just a moment more
But the world grows bleak.
And the hollow rain is waiting, watching
As quickly as the fire blankets the earth
So the hollow rain does disperse its load
The earth is heavy, the earth is damp
Turning now it trembles.
White, everything seems so old
So fragile in this thin, sweet coat
It crumbles, dancing from shaken limbs
As the earth breathes in, fresh again
Before resting in the cold.

I just call this one "The Night", cos i'm so lame

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I lie awake in bed at night,
Looking at the moon so bright.
And to this day i'm wondering why
You had left me here to cry

You said you didnt feel the same
And that i was the one to blame.
And though my love for you is real
You wont believe the way i feel.

I said it came as quite a shock,
Although, one day, i knew you'd knock
Upon my door and say to me
"I have to go. I have to flee"

But if you had meant what you said before
You wouldnt have knocked upon my door
So here I am, awake at night
And Wandering towards the light.

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It's the best i can do for 3 in the morning :p

That's beautiful Dan :emo:

And all the others are awesome aswell !

Dead Inside

Inspiration from the darkest hour in my life.

Thanks to Radiohead (Creep) and Hall and Oats (She's Gone), good song though;).

Sorry for the Promise I make,
because I was damn blind too see your eyes.
When I'm all alone,
an angel whisper to me.
Wake up from this unreal dream.

She tell me all the sin that I've done.
she make me to see you again.
She tell me that I've shattered someone heart.
And leave her alone in the cold night without any Guardian.

I'm only hope that an angel protect her.
And I Pay the devil to replace her.
I'll let the cigarette choke my thoughts away.
and I'll let my self high to forget my thought of you.

Now I can't see your shining eyes anymore
I'm afraid too see your shadow.
I'm afraid too see the world.
and I'm walk alone in this cold world.

Azerane: That one really gives you a visual and sets the tone...Awesome work! :cheese:

I like that one, Daniel...sometimes people do their best works at the night time...;)

That's pretty good, Fendi...especially since English is your second language...It expresses feeling well...:cheese:

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"The World I Can Give to You"

Tonight I see
What could be with you and me
under the star light romantically
As the sun goes down
and paints the sky every color
And the stars soon become our only cover
To hide our deep desire for one another

There's not a soul around
Baby, you and I are alone
And I'm about to make you feel
As if you're the only girl alive
I want to make you touch the sky
And reach for those stars
And try in might to reach the moon's light

Candles burn
Until they can burn no more
But our fire keeps the light burning brighter
Through out the night holding you tight
and in the morning treating you right
Until you can't reach much higher
But I will bring you to a new sky

In the distance
The city lights flicker with life
But in the hills love is the only voice
Calling to our souls like the coyote to the moon
The silouette of you is so beautiful
I can't help but take notice of you
As you inch closer and closer and closer

And closer
Until I feel the warmth of you
And I can hear you heart beat upon me
Our hearts becoming one beat like it was meant to be
And we paint our passion upon the sky
Lit up bright by the star light
Representing our love tonight

Can you feel it
In your soul and heart
A feeling powerful enough to rip you apart
But let me hold you in my arms
And help keep you together
Loving you with every breath I take
Ending this night the right way

I can't love any other woman
Because you are beautiful beyond the imagination
And every night can be ours to live
To light on fire with a passion so deep
that the oceans in this world couldn't keep
All you have to say is that you love me too
And this world I can give to you...

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"Heavenly Dream"

Just a whisper mentioned
On the ears of my family
And to those who love me
Please don't mourn for me
Just leave me as a distant memory
Lost in the centuries
Just another body in the cemetary
Another soul in the afterlife
Looking back at the aftermath
And I had to laugh
At the good times
And cry at the bad ones
The sad ones leaving hope
that did or didn't come
Then I wake up in a heaven
I can't believe the sight I'm seeing
No pain, don't know what it even means
The sadness that was inside of me
Was drained out as fast as lightning
Then I saw my friends
And I saw my dad
And the family I never met
Today was a day that I thought could never exist
Then I wake up from my dream
And the next night another brother bleeds
Shot up over some weed
And now he's in heaven
living that dream for me

wow theres really some great poems here...iv made one...but i dont know if i shuld post it our not....

This is what happens when I'm bored.

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There?s a certain beauty in your tears
As you weep over there in that shadowed corner.
You try to fight this.
No one believes you, because you?ve already failed.
The mascara running down that over-presented face tells all,
the one persistent theme being ?catastrophe?.
Tonight, ladies and gents, there?s a shotgun wedding,
all invited.
The bride: your fear of ineptitude;
the groom: your ambition to succeed.
These dreams are simply the script that the director cut from the finished production.
They shall never make it into reality, the public?s view of reality at least.
And the rage that wells up inside you comes to nothing,
for after every time you?ve tried,
hoped,
failed,
you return to that shadowed corner,
where at least people recognise that
there?s a certain beauty in your tears.

Roog... you are amazing, that first poem is beautiful, wish I could write so well.

Really nice Monai, always really cool writing from you, you're good.

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Originally posted by Azerane
You have some amazing rhymes Roog... I envy you :p

And now I know the poem you mean... well... if I had 3 verses before then it hasn't progressed at all... hehe. But I'll try to work on it for ya ;)

Here's an older one I don't think I posted...
18/9/05 Seasons (or some such similar title)

Fiery abandon drifts ever downwards
Veins void of lifeblood cracked and dried
Now lonely limbs reach out in vain
Aspiring to grasp fire for just a moment more
But the world grows bleak.
And the hollow rain is waiting, watching
As quickly as the fire blankets the earth
So the hollow rain does disperse its load
The earth is heavy, the earth is damp
Turning now it trembles.
White, everything seems so old
So fragile in this thin, sweet coat
It crumbles, dancing from shaken limbs
As the earth breathes in, fresh again
Before resting in the cold.

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Very nicely done azz

Very Discriptive, i can picture it clearly :D

well done :D

^Hehe... you're silly :p But thankyou :D

Something I found in my old poetry book, written September '05. If I remember rightly, I wrote it from the fear of if Kintaru ever just suddenly stopped coming on msn or e-mailing me... and then me never knowing what happened... and yeah... :D

As I walk these empty streets
I can't help but think,
Of what could have been.
In this always unrelenting heat
My mind and heart are numb,
Why did it end?

We were there and flying,
Dancing in each other's love
Until your fire went out.

Each and every day, I waited
Hoping for any word,
Just one...
And still I waited,
The sun rose, and set.
These are the longest hours.

If you died, I miss you,
And I'll forever miss you.
If you've found someone else,
Thankyou for the time we shared.
But I'm broken and used
If you lied to my heart.

Post your poem, Shadow, only if it feels right to post it...:cheese:

I like the vision your poem creates, Monai...:cheese:

Azerane, I was reading your poem and wondering why you had that fear...then I read your description and realized it's over a year old...:D...Very good work..:cheese:

Here's a Freestyle I call "October FreeStyle"...a freestyle is just writing down what comes to mind...well, actually it's coming up with lyrics to a beat off the top of your head...made popular in freestyle battles..

This took me about 8 to 10 minutes:

I'm living month to month
Say what
It's not enough
waitng for some
But it doesn't come
I guess it's all said and done
When the sun sets it's won
And it's one and done
Until the sun sets a new day
And rises in a new way
Over hills and valleys
Waiting for centuries
For just a mentioning
Of someone hoping to be
What I could never be
Thinking what I could never think
Wishing for everything
everyday
Until it's a reality and not a dream
Can you feel me
Or are you deaf to these words I speak
These streets are mean
To those making an honest living
Got to be demented
To survive even for a moment
If you own it
It's stolen by Christmas
I guess that's just how life is
Don't blame me, I didn't write it
I just write this verse I converse
With rage like an animal caged for days
Trying to escape in any way
Biting bars until teeth fall out
Clawing the ground
Until claws go dull
Staring at the wall
Until time stands still
And I can't tell
That the smell of death is chill
And I die with these words on my chest
Shot through my vest
Leaving a mess in the hall where I lived

:lol: yes... it's always good to read the description first Roog :p Thanks though :D

You're good at freestyle stuff, I have trouble writing poems that don't really have a set rhythm

Okay guys its not the best,its not bad (my opinion) :)

Thanks for reading


Are you feeling lonely?
Are you felling bad?
You just want a friend,
but there is nothing like that.

Now dont turn your back
to the world
Put on your smile,some
hapinnes is waiting fo you

Now are you feeling lonely?
Are you felling bad?
Tell me that is not true
The happines is waiting for you

That's a nice uplifting poem black_lion, nicely done =)

Nice, Black Lion...:cheese:

A new piece I wrote last night...or the night before...:D

"I'm Having Visions"


Rivers and the life they've given us
But what about the rivers that live within us
We are all sinners
Do wrong, like a sad song
Wanting to be winners all along
It wont be long
Until the river in you dries up
From giving up when life gets harda'
It's hard to die a martyr
Living life as a soldier
As the world around you gets colder
You gotta be strong
You can never belong
So you might as well dream on
These demons
Gaining ground in this war we wage
Friends victim of the rage
That lasts for days, months, and centuries
Please don't mention me
Because when I'm deceased
I want to go in peace
Leaving good memories
For people to remember me
I'm having visions...

I have visions of my friends dead
Hoping life has a happy endin'
It's the good that I'm wishin'
But it's the bad that I'm given
I'm having visions...

But it's hard
Not to think back
To a day that seems black
Painted in red
Where's my friend at?
Lying dead on the pavement
Wondering where's the peace at
When a piece fired two lead
Red hot bullets into his head
And now he's dead
It's hard to look ahead
When that day seems to never end
Goodbye my friend
Maybe I'll see you again
When it's my turn to leave this land
I'm having visions...

I have visions of my friends dead
Hoping life has a happy endin'
It's the good that I'm wishin'
But it's the bad that I'm given
I'm having visions...

I turn to God
And ask him why
This pain has me contemplating suicide
So I denounce my religion
And all its visions
Hoping to get out this prison that I'm livin'
The good is killed by these demons
With no reasons
But greed and revenge
Hatred at the helm
Screamin'
But there's no one to help
So I turn to myself
To get out of this hell
God lives within me
Not in a book that I read
Hoping that he'll have mercy and come to save me
Maybe he'll take me away from this place
And erase
All that I've seen and experienced
Witness to the evilness of man
No chance to fight back
Life's life and that's that
I'm having visions...

CHARCOAL SEX

Murder scrape the wall,
Thought you owned it all?
Fists of fury - vision blurry,
Bewildered rage - the beast be free from cage.

Shadows stalk, slow the walk.
Eyes of ice, the devious device.
Grit the teeth, stain the wreath.
Hunger hollow - your mind will follow.

Weapon of steel - my heart will not feel.
Bleeding raw, through it all.
Strike the match, that?s the catch.
Flames! Burning high, to the sky.

Panic blood, dive into the mud.
Black pit heaven, mirror to the hell we live in.
Miss , escape, in dire control you will rape.


Pound! The ground!
Smash, the glass.
Try - to die.

Chanting loud, make them proud.
Fight or flight.
Use your might.
From stone cold lust, this death is a must!

Dance the flames. Win, the games.
Laugh the sick, suffer the trick.
Vomit the good, - IF WE

C O U L D

No damned freedom! What evil we breed in!
I fight to live, live to fight.
The wounds, my doom -
Is clear before me now the world will fear.

T
H
E

W R A T H.

Long, and strong. I could only afford the sword.
Weakness broke, flood the gates.
Don?t stop me now, you?re all too late.
Frenzy! Can?t stop now can we?

Murder, steal, rape, eat.
Never accept the enemies defeat!
Beat them down, to the ground.
Break their face, the s*** disgrace!

Burn the home, I?ve got - nowhere to roam.
Steal it?s money, all compassion - stolen from me.
Rape the innocent, the truth - it?s what I meant.
Beat the foe, it?s mad - you would never know.

Scream! The walls turn white, the skies turn night.
Eyes of red, hollow head.
Claws of stone, morbid bone.
Creep in the dark, leave your mark.

Tremble in the reef, weep - in grief.
Crawl on your gut , the filth - f****** slut.
Eat the dust, feel - damn wasted lust!
Claw at you ears, gouge out your eyes, - such foiled demise!

End.

cool poems...dunno might post mine soon....

War of the Age.
Unending rage.

The time has come.
To stand among.
The unknown - alone.
To fight. To take flight.
Into the bowels of hell.

Freedom Bell!
Ring. Echo.
Let us know.

No sound. No sun.
The war has begun.
March!
Into the depths of evil.

The hum of the drum -
Rattle of the battle -
Days of the bloody waves.

Silent steeds - our decree.
Shake the ground, scream the sound.
Around the earth, let madness birth.

Cold mud , hot blood.
Stiff hands, endless demands.
Tyrant kings, thrilling things.
Bewilderment!

Flying lead- knocking dead.
Gritting teeth, now unsheathe.

Through pain we gain.
Fall to your knees and weep endlessly.
Wounded. Struck down. Pulled under.

To die. Death. Murder. Rape. Rage. Cold blood, draining the lands. Silent demands.
Stone soldiers.

?.hear the drum?..
??..hear it?s hum??.

The enemy has come.
The war - begun.

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R I S E

Lol lawl ^

Don't click the link unless you want p4on. nice poem bro